题目
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As we all know, the “(passenger) transport during the Spring Festival period” has been a hot phrase all through the China land.
The volume of passenger traffic(客运量) reaches its climax before and after the Spring Festival. Especially, the number of those who decide to go back to their hometown by train is increasing rapidly, so it promotes the short of the tickets of passenger train. Luckily, the Ministry of Railways(铁道部) has come up with solutions. For instance, it arranges extra trains during the peak time for passenger transport as well as opens 24-hour ticket sales windows for passengers in order to ease the traffic pressure. Moreover, it helps to deliver train tickets to the doorsteps, providing convenience for passengers.
One thing that has to be mentioned this year is about start of selling tickets on-line this year. For one thing, it to some degree shortens the time of purchasing tickets. However, most of the passengers are migrant workers returning home for Spring Festival. They are not familiar with the process of buying tickets and as a result cannot buy the tickets on time. What is worse, many computers selling tickets broke down under too much pressure of operation. Therefore, many people blame such a method in that it doesn’t suit nowadays’ situation.
[写作内容]
以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。
以约120个词对“春运”进一步叙写,内容包括:
自己亲身经历或者听闻的一次火车春运的状况;
“网上售票”引起人们不满的原因;
给铁道部或者农民工提出解决“网上购票”问题的合理化建议。
[写作要求]
作文中可以使用亲身经历或者虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子;
作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
[评分标准]
概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,语句连贯。
答案
Although it is as crowded as usual during the “transport during the Spring Festival period”, many solutions have been raised. But this year, with another problem of buying tickets on-line appearing, many are dissatisfied.
Last year, I, together with my parents, went to our hometown by train. At that time, you can imagine how crowded it was in the railway station and how difficult it was for us to buy a ticket. Worse still, it was raining and we had to wait in queue patiently for our turn to buy tickets. This year, things are much better. We can buy tickets through Internet. However, some other problems appear.
Reasons for the problems of buying tickets on-line are divided. For migrant workers, lacking the knowledge of handling computers has trapped them into trouble. Also, the ticket-selling system is not advanced enough to cope with difficult situations.
To solve the problem, I suggest that not only should the Ministry of Railways update or better the ticket-selling system regularly but also provide more convenient and easy ways for migrant workers to buy tickets. As for migrant workers, they can learn to purchase their tickets on-line with the help of Internet or co-workers. Choosing other means of transportation to return back is also available.
解析
试题分析:本文属于读写任务写作,动笔前,一定要认真阅读原文,并理解内容。认真看清题目要求,这篇书面表达给了一段材料:先要求以约30个词概括上文的主要内容,要求有很高的概括提炼的能力,要抓住文章的主题,再以约120个词写一篇短文,按照要点去表达,不能有遗漏,写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。写作时尽量使用自己会的单词、词组和句型,同时也要注意使用一些高级语法和句型,使自己的文章更有文采。
【亮点说明】文章简洁的总结了所给材料,语言规范,内容合适,语篇连贯,使用了词组和句型:cope with 处理,As for 至于,with the help of 在…的帮助下,Worse still更糟糕的是, But this year, with another problem of buying tickets on-line appearing, many are dissatisfied. 这句话用了with复合结构, At that time, you can imagine how crowded it was in the railway station and how difficult it was for us to buy a ticket.这句话用了宾语从句和it做形式主语, For migrant workers, lacking the knowledge of handling computers has trapped them into trouble. 这句话用了动名词做主语, To solve the problem, I suggest that not only should the Ministry of Railways update or better the ticket-selling system regularly but also provide more convenient and easy ways for migrant workers to buy tickets.这句话用了不定式做目的状语。
核心考点
试题【阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。As we all know, the “(passenger) transport during t】;主要考察你对写作等知识点的理解。[详细]
举一反三
学生 | 观点 |
赞同者 | 1.方便、快捷、舒适的交通工具; 2.反映出国民生活条件提高,国家富强; 3.带动其他行业发展。 |
反对者 | 1.废气污染严重; 2.汽车过多影响交通,导致更多事故; 3.停车问题日益突出。 |
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear editor,
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we recently had about whether it is good or not for families to own cars.
_____________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
Yours truly,
Li Hua
1. 大部分时间用来做功课;
2. 周日下午和朋友去体育场打篮球;
3. 有时和父母一起去看望爷爷奶奶;
4. 其他活动。
注意:1. 词数120-150;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
支持者 | 反对者 |
便于与亲友联系 | 玩手机游戏,看电影等影响学习 |
可上网查找信息 | 贵重物品容易丢失 |
…… | …… |
你的观点? |
Dear Sir,
I’m writing to tell you ____________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________
Best wishes, Yours,
Li Hua
注意:①文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称; ②可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;③ 词数不少于120。
你校学生课外阅读的现状;
原因分析;
你的看法;
注意:1.根据所给提示,适当发挥,要求内容充实,语意连贯。
2.字数不少于100。开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。
3.邮件中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。
Dear Helen,
Thank you for your email. Now I would like to tell you something about
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
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