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阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
Hi, I am Mike. I just went through my first year of college. The toughest part on me at first was the general adjustment.1 went to a very small high school where my mom was a teacher and she did practically everything for me. But at the college I needed to know some basic life skills. such as balancing a check—book, laundry, and the things you have to be able to handle that I never thought of in the high school! It was really tough for me at first and I got badly homesick.
Once that first semester was over and I got used to the college life, I loved it—good facilities, helpful instructors. and a good library. The Students’ Union organizes various parties every week. I also go to cinemas and concerts, and often spend Saturday nights in pubs and clubs.
One thing I think is important is to get yourself active in things. I was on the dance team in college and met a ton of people that way ··· it was so much easier to make friends when you had a common ground.
[写作内容]
学校最近组织了一次中美学生交流活动,你参加其中的“大学校园生活”讨论。听完Mike的发言之后,你准备写一份发言稿,题目是“Preparing Myself for College Life”,内容要点包括:
1. 以约30个词概括Mike的发言要点;
2. 然后以约120个词谈谈你理想的大学生活,内容包括:
(1) 对中学生活的感受;
(2) 理想的大学生活;
(3) 中学生活和大学生活的差别,以及你打算如何适应。
[写作要求]
1. 在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子;
2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
[评分标准]
概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,篇章连贯
答案

Mike’s mother did almost everything for him when in high school, which brought him a hard time adjusting to the first-year college life. However, afterwards he got accustomed to it because of the academic atmosphere and colorful activities there.
As for me, what I do everyday is to study hard to enter a famous university, which is always the expectations of my parents and teachers. So traveling among classroom, dormitory and canteen is the routine work. Seldom do I have the time to do some activities. Anyway, unlike you, I have learned how to be independent in a boarding school, which is beneficial to adjust to the college life.
It seems to me the ideal college life is that I become matured both physically and mentally,and that I obtain qualified academic knowledge and get well prepared for society at the same time.
As we all know,college is wildly different from middle school. It connects not only adolescence to adulthood,but also the ivory tower to the real society. So an active part in activities,associations,as well as some romances are three keys to achieving my ideal college life.
解析

试题分析:本文讨论的话题是“大学校园生活”;首先你要描述你理想的大学生活:课程丰富,活动多样;学术氛围浓郁,研究和实验的任务较重,都可以作为你写作的重点。对中学生活的感受可以从学习压力巨大,活动很少,课程考试多等方面综合展开。如果适应大学生活方面可以从先做准备,多了解大学生活,做好心理和思想上准备。要求考生在保证内容要点全部概括的基础上可以充分发挥自己的想象,进而用自己的语言来表达某种观点或看法,增添了写作的灵活性,同时能较好地考查考生的想象能力和英语语言表达能力。
点评:半开放性作文给出了一个话题,并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时,首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型,在你的能力范围之内,选择句式时要赋予变化,因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词,把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体,如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候,可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采,也能增加得高分的可能性。
核心考点
试题【阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。Hi, I am Mike. I just went through my first year of】;主要考察你对写作等知识点的理解。[详细]
举一反三
你校响应号召创建节约型校园,可是浪费现象依然极其严重。请你在班会课上发表演讲,号召同学们从我做起,杜绝浪费。内容包括:
浪费的东西有水、电、餐厅的食物等;
危害性:自身性格、父母经济负担、自然资源等;
提出措施。
注意:
词数120左右,演讲的开头和结尾已写好,不记入总词数;
不要逐次逐条翻译,要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。
Dear friends,
May I have you attention, please? Now I’d like to make a speech here.
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书面表达(满分25分)
假如你叫Jane,得知朋友Sarah日渐发胖后,建议她去咨询一下医生,以后尽量少吃含糖多的食物,诸如巧克力、奶油等,少吃高脂肪的食物,多吃蔬菜水果,保持平衡饮食。同时要多锻炼。那样的话,她就又会变成苗条的姑娘了。
根据以上提示写一封英语书信。注意:1、不要逐一翻译;2、添加适当的过渡词;3、字数100左右。
                                                              
                                                                         
                                                                      
                                                             
                                                            
                                                             
                                                                             
                                                              
                                                             
                                                             
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假设你是本刊读者Jack,请你根据所给的背景材料给Peter写封回信。内容包括:
1.分析Peter父母不同意的理由;
2.你给Peter的具体建议: 1) 和父母好好谈谈,让他们意识到参加街舞培训班的好处。2)请培训班老师帮忙。3)向父母承诺不花费太多时间影响学习。
背景材料:
Teenagers 总228(10/2009)期
编者按:本期刊登了Peter的来信,欢迎读者就信中谈到的问题进行分析并提出建议。
Editor,
I’m a boy of 18. I like arts, especially dancing. I want to attend a hip-hop (街舞) training course on the weekend, but my parents don’t permit me to. I’m very upset and need your advice.
Peter
注意:1、词数100左右;2、文章的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear peter,
You are very upset that your parents don’t permit you to attend a hip-hop training course on the weekend.                                                           
                                                                         
Yours,
Jack
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目前,有不少中学生不做家务,就此你班开展了一次讨论,主要观点如下:
 
应该做家务
是一种相应的调节,对学习有好处;
可以锻炼生活自理能力;
并学会如何照顾自己和他人。
 
不应该做家务
 
首要任务是学习,中学生学习负担重。
 
你的观点
        
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请你根据以上信息,用英文给报社写一篇短文,阐述你的观点和看法。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear editor,
Recently our class held a discussion about whether middle school students should do housework at home.                                                                            
                                                                                    
                                                                                  
Best wishes.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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假设你是育才中学的李华,将参加主题为“Let’s Ride Bicycles”的英语演讲比赛,请撰写一份演讲稿,主要内容包括:
目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题;
骑自行车的益处,如节能环保、有利健康等。
参考词汇:低碳生活(low-carbon life);节能(energy saving)
注意1. 词数:120词左右;
演讲稿开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Good morning, everyone.
I’m Li Hua from Yucai Middle School.
The topic of my speech is “Let’s Ride Bicycles”…                                                                                                                                                                         
                                                                                   
(请将短文改错和书面表达写在答题卡上,写在此试卷上无效)
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