题目
题型:不详难度:来源:
篇100-120个词的短文。
要求:1)记述事情的经过,内容必须结合生活中的一个事例。
2)简要说明好的心态对于获得成功的重要性以及从中得到的启示。
3) 文中不得透露个人姓名及班级名称。
A Good State of Mind Is The Base of Success
答案
A Good State of Mind Is The Base of Success
Life is complicated. We can’t avoid anything annoying or stressful. Therefore, what is of great importance is that we should keep a good state of mind.
An experience never fades from my memory. With a vital exam drawing near, I felt so nervous that I even couldn’t eat or sleep, thus making me very sleepy in class. Seeing this, my teacher came to my help. With her aid, I adjusted myself and felt confident again. In the meantime, a detailed plan was made to go over my lessons. In the end, I managed to pass the exam.
It was a good state of mind that helped me get through the exam. A good state of mind is what it takes to realize our goal. Whenever your emotion is out of control, just keep in mind that only by possessing a good state of mind can you attain success.
解析
试题分析:考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题,并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时,首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型,在你的能力范围之内,选择句式时要赋予变化,因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词,把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体,在发表个人观点的时候,可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采,也能增加得高分的可能性。
【亮点说明】范文主题明确,夹叙夹议,在语言上用了一些常见的短语In the meantime同时, In the end最后, go over复习,out of control失去控制, keep in mind 记住,句式上也是富有变化:Therefore, what is of great importance is that we should keep a good state of mind.这句话用了主语从句和表语从句, With a vital exam drawing near, I felt so nervous that I even couldn’t eat or sleep, thus making me very sleepy in class.这句话用了with复合结构和现在分词做结果状语, Seeing this, my teacher came to my help.这句话用了现在分词做伴随状语, It was a good state of mind that helped me get through the exam.这句话用了强调句。 A good state of mind is what it takes to realize our goal. 这句话用了表语从句,Whenever your emotion is out of control, just keep in mind that only by possessing a good state of mind can you attain success.这句话用了让步状语从句和倒装句。
核心考点
试题【请以“A good state of mind is the base of success.”为题,结合你生活中的一个事例,用英语写一篇100-120个词的短】;主要考察你对写作等知识点的理解。[详细]
举一反三
英语成绩不理想; 2。恐难进心仪大学;3。花时多,收效少
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要求:1. 不要逐条翻译,可适当发挥,行文通畅;2. 词数:120左右
Dear Alan,
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Best wishes
1.表达歉意并解释缺考原因;
2.询问补考时间及课外作业(如阅读书目、作业要求等)。
注意:
1.词数:l20—150;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mrs.Clemens,
内容要点:
1.简述两位同学的梦想及理由;
2.你的未来“梦想”是什么;
3.谈谈你的想法。
注意:
1.词数120左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
3.开头部分已为你写好,不计入总词数。
My Dream
As is shown in the table, my classmates’ dreams vary considerably.
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益处:发展多种技能,培养多种爱好, 丰富生活;开阔视野,完善自我;增加就业机会
弊端:孩子自我支配时间少; 压力更大; 加重家庭经济负担等
你的观点: ……
注意:
1.词数120左右;短文的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
2.参考词汇: horizon视野
Many parents are trying to find tutors to teach their children special skills such as music, dancing, calligraphy, painting, chess and so on,
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请你给她回信并提出建议。内容如下:
注意合理饮食:多吃鱼,豆类等有营养的食品及新鲜蔬菜和水果,不要吃太多的肉和甜食;
多参加体育锻炼;
保证充足睡眠,不要熬夜,每天至少睡8个小时。
注意:1。词数:120左右
2.信的开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。
3.参考词汇:有营养的:nutritious
Dear Jenny
Yours
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