题目
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注意:词数为100左右。
答案
Dear editor,
Now, more and more students are getting fond of western fast food, and thus they take in too much sugar and fat. I don’t think it good for their health.
There are all kinds of foods in the world. Which one is healthier, the Chinese food or the western fast food? Different people have different choices.
In my opinion, the Chinese food is healthier. Firstly, the Chinese food contains a lot of fruit and green vegetables. It is rich in fiber and low in sugar and fat. Secondly, the Chinese food is very delicious and has many dishes. It is nice to taste. I think it is the healthiest in the world. So many Chinese people can keep fit and have white teeth.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
解析
试题分析:考查应用文中的书信的写作。请你给21世纪报社写信,反映你对当今学生饮食的看法,要点都已经给出,书信类短文的关键在于要点要全面包括,不能有遗漏和省略。但是要点只是提纲,考生还要在此基础上增加细节,不要逐字逐句翻译,同时注意谋篇布局的顺序,运用合适的连接词连接全文,同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。审题时注意本文使用一般现在时,描述要尽量选择简洁的语言,运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型,可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词被句子连接起来,这样文章显得更连贯。
【亮点说明】文章中表达的时候使用了词组和句型:get fond of 喜欢,take in 摄入, keep fit 保持健康。I don’t think it good for their health.这句话用了否定前移和it做形式宾语, In my opinion, 在我看来,be rich in富含…,It is nice to taste.这句话用了it做形式主语,也适当使用了关联词:Firstly, Secondly,
核心考点
举一反三
1. 你感兴趣的夏令营. 2. 为什么想参加这个活动。 3. 对这项活动有怎样的打算和期待。注意: 1. 词数100左右。 2. 信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数
Dear Sir / Madame,
I am very glad that the English Summer Camp will be held to help us improve
English and learn more about English culture.
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Yours truly,
Li Hua
We often hear people say, “Life is hard!” Faced with difficulties and even failures in life, people’s attitudes are different. Some feel optimistic(乐观的) while others do not. Do be optimistic in your school life.
注意:①无须写标题,不得照抄英语提示语;②除诗歌外,文体不限;③文中不得透露个人姓名和名称;④词数不少于120。
我们周围不擅长交流的人挺多的,劝他不必为此事苦恼;
告诉他与别人有效地交流是很重要的。与他人搞好关系,可以有助于我们的学习,还能增加成功的机会;
就如何改变目前的情况给他提出至少两点建议。
注意:1. 字数:100字左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
3. 信的开头结尾已给出,不计入总字数。
Dear Wang Nan,
I know you are feeling annoyed these days because____________________________
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All the best.
Yours,
Li Hua
1. 火车晚点15分钟,与接你的Tom 错过。
2. 在火车上认识的定居美国的华人夫妇Taylor 把你带到Tom家,Tom不在;
3. 目前在Taylor 夫妇家;
4. 务必今晚打电话给你;电话号码是64611128.
注意
1. 词数100左右;
2. 不要逐字翻译,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯;
3. 信的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
I’m in New York!
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Yours,
Li Hua
As we all know, the “(passenger) transport during the Spring Festival period” has been a hot phrase all through the China land.
The volume of passenger traffic(客运量) reaches its climax before and after the Spring Festival. Especially, the number of those who decide to go back to their hometown by train is increasing rapidly, so it promotes the short of the tickets of passenger train. Luckily, the Ministry of Railways(铁道部) has come up with solutions. For instance, it arranges extra trains during the peak time for passenger transport as well as opens 24-hour ticket sales windows for passengers in order to ease the traffic pressure. Moreover, it helps to deliver train tickets to the doorsteps, providing convenience for passengers.
One thing that has to be mentioned this year is about start of selling tickets on-line this year. For one thing, it to some degree shortens the time of purchasing tickets. However, most of the passengers are migrant workers returning home for Spring Festival. They are not familiar with the process of buying tickets and as a result cannot buy the tickets on time. What is worse, many computers selling tickets broke down under too much pressure of operation. Therefore, many people blame such a method in that it doesn’t suit nowadays’ situation.
[写作内容]
以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。
以约120个词对“春运”进一步叙写,内容包括:
自己亲身经历或者听闻的一次火车春运的状况;
“网上售票”引起人们不满的原因;
给铁道部或者农民工提出解决“网上购票”问题的合理化建议。
[写作要求]
作文中可以使用亲身经历或者虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子;
作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
[评分标准]
概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,语句连贯。
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