题目

题型：不详难度：来源：

假如你是李华，于11月12日到达纽约，然后去找你的美国朋友Tom, 但他不在家。请按以下内容给Tom 留张便条。
1. 火车晚点15分钟，与接你的Tom 错过。
2. 在火车上认识的定居美国的华人夫妇Taylor 把你带到Tom家，Tom不在；
3. 目前在Taylor 夫妇家；
4. 务必今晚打电话给你；电话号码是64611128.
注意
1. 词数100左右；
2. 不要逐字翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；
3. 信的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
I’m in New York!
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Yours,
Li Hua

答案

Dear Tom,
I’m in New York! It’s really a pity that I didn’t find you at the railway station. You may have left when my train arrived, a quarter behind the schedule.
Luckily, on the train I came across Mr. Taylor and his wife, who are Chinese and have been living in the US for several years. Seeing that there was no one to meet me at the station, they offered to drive me to your house.
As you happen to be out, I’ve decided to accept the Taylors’ offer to stay at their house for the night. I’ve decided to put up here for the night. They are very friendly to me, so don’t worry about me. I’ll be all right. It cannot be better if you can call me at my phone number 64611128 this evening.
Looking forward to meeting you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua

解析

试题分析：
这是一篇书信类作文，要点已经给出。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。我们所要做的就是按要点内容给Tom留张便条。注意题目的要求，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要把表格中的要点都写出来，不要有遗漏。写作时尽量使用自己不会的单词、词组和句型，同时也要注意使用一些高级语法和句型，使自己的文章更有文采。
【亮点说明】文章中表达的时候使用了词组和句型：came across 遇上，happen to 碰巧做…put up 住宿，It’s really a pity that I didn’t find you at the railway station. 这句话用了it做形式主语， Luckily, on the train I came across Mr. Taylor and his wife, who are Chinese and have been living in the US for several years.这句话用了定语从句， Seeing that there was no one to meet me at the station, they offered to drive me to your house.这句话用了现在分词做状语， It cannot be better if you can call me at my phone number 64611128 this evening.这句话用了否定词和比较级连用表示最高级的用法。