题目

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下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. One day I saw a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred Yuan. I asked my father the money. But he said he could only give me half of the money. He should find the other half myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleasing when I showed him the money a month after. He gives me the other fifty. You can imagine what happy I was when I rode to school on my own bicycle.

答案

小题1:friend → friends
小题2:it → one
小题3:that →which
小题4:加上for
小题5:he → I
小题6:去掉the
小题7:pleasing → pleased
小题8:after → later
小题9:gives → gave
小题10:what →how

解析

试题分析：
小题1:… most of my friend had bicycles. 改为friends. （most of + 可数名词复数 / 不可数名词）
小题2:I hoped I could also have it. 改为one （it指代同一件东西；one指代同一类事物）
小题3:…, that was only one hundred Yuan. 改为which （that不引导非限制性定语从句）
小题4:I asked my father ∧ the money. 加上for （向某人索要某物：ask sb. for .sth.）
小题5:He should find the other half myself. 改为I （父亲说给我一半买车的钱，另一半必须“我”自己想办法）
小题6:So I went to sell newspapers after the school. 去掉the （after school, 固定用法，意为“放学后”）
小题7:My father was pleasing when… 改为pleased （pleased, 感到高兴；pleasing, 令人高兴）
小题8:…when I showed him the money a month after. 改为later （later, 副词，意为“后来”； after, 介词或连词，后接名词或句子）
小题9:He gives me the other fifty. 改为gave （时态错误。父亲“给”钱发生于过去）
小题10:You can imagine what happy I was… 改为how （what是代词，后接名词；how是副词，后接形容词或副词。happy是形容词，前面应用how）