题目

题型：不详难度：来源：

假设某美国教育代表团将来你校参观访问，请你根据下表提示的信息，用英语向外宾简单介绍学校近年来所发生的变化，并谈谈你的感想。

环境及设施	过去	现在
	至少列举两例说明过去情况	操场更大、篮球场更多；图书新、品种多； 树木四季常青，学校美如花园……
你的感想	……

注意：
1．词数不少于90。文章的开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。
2．要点完整、层次清晰、语法正确、上下文连贯。
3．文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。
Ladies and gentlemen! It’s my honor to tell you about the changes to our school.
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I hope you will enjoy your stay in our school. Thank you very much!

答案

Ladies and gentlemen! It’s my honor to tell you about the changes to our school.
In the past, there was only a small playground. The books in the library were old and there were only a few kinds of them. The number of the trees and flowers was small.
But things have greatly changed these years. Now we have a bigger playground and more basketball courts. More different kinds of new books can be lent to us. Our school is as beautiful as a garden with lots of green trees all year round.
I think it’s lucky of us to have such good studying environment. We will work harder and serve the people better in the future.
I hope you will enjoy your stay in our school. Thank you very much!

解析

试题分析：这是一篇介绍类作文，要点和开头结尾已经给出。我们所要做的就是用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。本作文中给出的要点比较简略,故需要自由发挥的地方较多。需要注意不要偏离文章中心。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头结尾,不能出现文章脱节问题.尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
点评：本文属于介绍类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。