题目

My name is Lihua.Recently I’ve learned that a summer camp is going to be held in Singapore by a national middle school organization.On hearing the news,I feel excited and am eager to have a try.
As for myself,I am an outgoing person who loves to take part in lots of activities.Constantly,I hang out with my friends to enjoy ourselves.At school,I am active in every class.As a result,I always get good grades in exams.When it comes to my English,I am good at oral English,but still have a lot of work to do.In my opinion,students should seize every chance to grow experience.So,I would like to take part in the summer camp to introduce our country and also learn from other activities.
I hope that you can approve that plan so I could gain more experience.Hoping to get your reply!
书面表达
假定你是李华，从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡((Singapore)举办夏
令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。
内容主要包括:
I.自我介绍(包括英语能力);
2.参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家);
3.希望获准.
注意:
1.词数100左右:
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;
3.邮件

提问时间：2021-03-25

答案

高三生,以做一篇短文改错的方式来看你的作文的……几个建议⒈【On hearing the news】,I feel excited…如果要用非谓语的话,On要去掉,hear与I构成主动关系用ing可以,feel应该用过去式felt⒉【As a result】,I always...