题目

大家看一下我写的英语作文（初一写的）```
一：自我介绍；
Hello,everyone!My name is Steven Yuan,I'm.
I like eating hamburgers,salad and eggs,but I don't like carrots at all.As for sports,I like playing basketball,but I don't like playing soccer or baseball.My favorite colour is blue,but I hate white.
This is me.
二：介绍朋友
Tom is my friend.He's 12 years old.
He likes eating hamburgers,salad and eggs,but he doesn't like carrots at all.As for sports,he likes playing basketball,but he doesn't like playing soccer or baseball.His favorite colour is blue,but he hates white.
He is my good friend.
帮我修改
今天下午可能这是段考作文题!（顺便打个分~·（10分满分））
Hello,everyone!My name is Steven Yuan,I'm 12.
两个题目任选一个···
字数是50~

提问时间：2021-03-03

答案

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蛮好,可以给10分了.
playing soccer or baseball
or 最好改为 and
可以加上一句 .. come from ...