题目

哪位能帮忙点评一篇托福作文
(what is more important for a student,understand ideas and concepts or understand facts)
Ideas and concepts are not independent to the facts,they are connected with facts.Facts are related with ideas and concepts,ideas and concepts cannot exist without facts.However,I think while learning,it is more important for students to learn ideas and concepts.
It is true that concepts and ideas cannot live without facts,but if you do not have a concept or idea to about a fact,you cannot understand what the fact is.
For example,in every place at every time,whatever a object move,it will land on the ground finally,but for many years people do not know why the objects are forced to the downward direction.This situation had never changed until Newton began to research the movement of objects and suggested three laws of moving of objects.After the concept of force makes object move and the gravity,people began to understand many facts of moving among objects.If there wer

提问时间：2021-01-03

答案

总体还算不错.但实考很难到good
首先逻辑已经符合托福要求了内容也还算可以.字数也不算少
语法方面细小的语法错误有点多（介词使用主谓一致多多少少有点错）
另外就是词汇的使用太土了.托福是语言考试所以多用高级词汇绝对会加分的