题目

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假设你是李华，你班来自新西兰的交流学生Phelps生病回国治疗。请你用英语给他写封e-mail,主要内容包括：
1、询问病情；
2、介绍班级近况；
3、表达祝愿。
注意：1、词数100左右；
2、可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
Dear  Phelps,
I’m sorry that you have to go back home for medical treatment .
Yours   Li  Hua

答案

Dear Phelps,
I’m sorry that you have to go back home for medical treatment . Are you feeling any better now? All of us are concerned about you and miss you very much.
Everything is going well here. I am glad to tell you that out class did much better in the football match this year and won the champion, which made our head teacher, Mr. Wang , very happy. Lin Tao came first in the final Speech Contest held last week. As you know, the Art Festival is drawing near. We are now busy preparing an English drama and a dance for it. We hope you will be back soon to join us in our colorful school life.
All the classmates join me in sending our best wishes for your quick recovery.
Yours
Li Hua

解析

这是一篇应用文写作，写一封信。由于本文给出的材料较少，动笔前先要围绕要点组织材料，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。写作前先结合要表达的事情确定句子的人称时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。注意写作中的时态、人称和数的问题，时态一般是一般现在时态，人称是第一人称较多。写作中语言要准确、简明，说明有条理，符合逻辑。