题目

题型：不详难度：来源：

请你根据所给材料、提纲以及要求写一篇英文稿件。
背景材料：
编者按：本期刊出Lora的来信，欢迎读者就信中谈到的问题进行分析并提出建议。
Dear editor.
I’m a senior high school student,and I want to work part-time this summer. I think it is good to do so, but my parents don’t agree with me. I just can’t understand them and I need your advice.
Lara
要求：1.短文须写在答题卡的指定区域。
2.短文词数120左右。
3.内容充实，可适当增加使行文流畅，结构完整，语意连贯。
4.书写须清晰、工整。
提纲：第1段：Lora利用暑假打工的理由(赚零花钱及学会独立、如何处世等)
第2段：Lora父母不同意的理由(对学习及个人安全等方面的考虑)
第3段：你给Lora的具体建议
I think that the following are the reasons why Lora wants to work part-time.
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答案

I think that the following are the reasons why Lora wants to work part-time . First, she can make some pocket money to meet her daily needs and thus develop a sense of independence. Second. she can learn how to deal with various problems in the workplace. Third, she can build up new friendships and improve social skills.
But her parents may regard learning as an increasingly important task for Lora. This holiday should be a catch-up time for independent study. Besides, personal safety may also be one of their major considerations.
My advice for Lora is this: make a detailed plan for her study and work; ask her friends to work together with her, and tell her parents that she ean manage things properly. I wish Lora a pleasant summer.

解析

考查提纲类作文的写作。话题是就信中谈到的问题进行分析并提出建议，所以首先要审题，找出要点，要点是以提纲的形式表示的，第1段：Lora利用暑假打工的理由(赚零花钱及学会独立、如何处世等)第2段：Lora父母不同意的理由(对学习及个人安全等方面的考虑)第3段：你给Lora的具体建议要适当增加细节，不能只是把要点翻译成英语、，注意改变文章的样式。难度在于选择合适的词汇和句型表达文章需要的意思，可以变换使用一些容易驾驭的句子或者词汇实现同样的目的。还要使用合适的连接词来连接各要点，使文章成为一个整体。提纲类作文的关键在于表达方式的选择和要点的完备，不能有遗漏或者省略。因为本文的要求是不能写出提纲式，所以在写作的时候要变换句式，不能一个句式一成不变，要给阅卷老师新鲜的感觉。