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假如你是王平,你作为交换生,已经在美国加州留学六个月了。你的朋友李华来信询问你在美国学习生活的情况,请你根据以下内容给李华写一封回信。
[写作内容]
刚到美国
现在
第一次到美国,很难融入当地人的生活。
调节自我,适应新环境
语言不通
英语口语进步大
想家
有宾至如归的感觉
不习惯美国的学习模式
学习预科课程,适应美国的教学,成为一个自主学习者。
[写作要求]  1. 必须使用5个句子表达全部内容。
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总句数内。
3. 预科课程:the preparation course
Dear Li Hua,
Thanks for your letter. I am very glad to tell you about my life and study here as an exchange student in California, the USA. Six months ago, … …

Hope to see you again soon.
Best wishes.
Love,
Wang Ping
答案

A possible version:
Dear Li Hua,
Thanks for your letter. I am very glad to tell you about my life and study here as an exchange student in California, the USA. Six months ago, it was my first time that I had been to the USA, so it was really difficult for me to fit in with the life here. On my arrival here, I couldn’t understand what people said or communicate freely with them in English, and nor could I get used to the different study pattern here, so I missed home a lot. Fortunately, I have adjusted myself to the new surroundings as soon as possible and seized every opportunity to practice speaking English with the local people. As a result, now I have made rapid progress in oral English and felt at home to live here. What’s more, I’ve also attended the preparation course which helps me to get used to the academic requirements in America and become a more autonomous learner.
Hope to see you again soon.
Best wishes.
Love,
Wang Ping
解析

试题分析:这是一篇提纲类作文,我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。
点评:本文属于提纲类作文,动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累,写作联系以外,还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文,这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
核心考点
试题【假如你是王平,你作为交换生,已经在美国加州留学六个月了。你的朋友李华来信询问你在美国学习生活的情况,请你根据以下内容给李华写一封回信。[写作内容]刚到美国现在第】;主要考察你对写作等知识点的理解。[详细]
举一反三
请你根据下列内容用英语写一篇短文。内容包括:
什么是世界上最重要的事情?我想,答案应该是健康。良好的健康对我们非常重要,
有了健康他就能享受人生的乐趣。健康需要三个因素:它们是营养食物,新鲜空气和适当
运动。为了保持平衡饮食,我们应当避免吃太多高热量的食物,比如炸薯条或甜点, 同时
应该多吃蔬菜和新鲜水果。每天做运动有助于我们拥有强健的身体,是我们保持身体健康
的一个重要部分。
写作要求:1.必须使用5个句子表达全部的内容;
2.短文稿必须包括所有内容信息,行文连贯通顺。
评分标准:句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。
提示词: (1)营养食物:nourishing food  (2) 平衡饮食:balanced diet 
(3) 炸薯条:French fries  (4)甜点:sweets  (5)高热量:high calory
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阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
Hi, I am Mike. I just went through my first year of college. The toughest part on me at first was the general adjustment.1 went to a very small high school where my mom was a teacher and she did practically everything for me. But at the college I needed to know some basic life skills. such as balancing a check—book, laundry, and the things you have to be able to handle that I never thought of in the high school! It was really tough for me at first and I got badly homesick.
Once that first semester was over and I got used to the college life, I loved it—good facilities, helpful instructors. and a good library. The Students’ Union organizes various parties every week. I also go to cinemas and concerts, and often spend Saturday nights in pubs and clubs.
One thing I think is important is to get yourself active in things. I was on the dance team in college and met a ton of people that way ··· it was so much easier to make friends when you had a common ground.
[写作内容]
学校最近组织了一次中美学生交流活动,你参加其中的“大学校园生活”讨论。听完Mike的发言之后,你准备写一份发言稿,题目是“Preparing Myself for College Life”,内容要点包括:
1. 以约30个词概括Mike的发言要点;
2. 然后以约120个词谈谈你理想的大学生活,内容包括:
(1) 对中学生活的感受;
(2) 理想的大学生活;
(3) 中学生活和大学生活的差别,以及你打算如何适应。
[写作要求]
1. 在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子;
2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
[评分标准]
概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,篇章连贯
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你校响应号召创建节约型校园,可是浪费现象依然极其严重。请你在班会课上发表演讲,号召同学们从我做起,杜绝浪费。内容包括:
浪费的东西有水、电、餐厅的食物等;
危害性:自身性格、父母经济负担、自然资源等;
提出措施。
注意:
词数120左右,演讲的开头和结尾已写好,不记入总词数;
不要逐次逐条翻译,要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。
Dear friends,
May I have you attention, please? Now I’d like to make a speech here.
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书面表达(满分25分)
假如你叫Jane,得知朋友Sarah日渐发胖后,建议她去咨询一下医生,以后尽量少吃含糖多的食物,诸如巧克力、奶油等,少吃高脂肪的食物,多吃蔬菜水果,保持平衡饮食。同时要多锻炼。那样的话,她就又会变成苗条的姑娘了。
根据以上提示写一封英语书信。注意:1、不要逐一翻译;2、添加适当的过渡词;3、字数100左右。
                                                              
                                                                         
                                                                      
                                                             
                                                            
                                                             
                                                                             
                                                              
                                                             
                                                             
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假设你是本刊读者Jack,请你根据所给的背景材料给Peter写封回信。内容包括:
1.分析Peter父母不同意的理由;
2.你给Peter的具体建议: 1) 和父母好好谈谈,让他们意识到参加街舞培训班的好处。2)请培训班老师帮忙。3)向父母承诺不花费太多时间影响学习。
背景材料:
Teenagers 总228(10/2009)期
编者按:本期刊登了Peter的来信,欢迎读者就信中谈到的问题进行分析并提出建议。
Editor,
I’m a boy of 18. I like arts, especially dancing. I want to attend a hip-hop (街舞) training course on the weekend, but my parents don’t permit me to. I’m very upset and need your advice.
Peter
注意:1、词数100左右;2、文章的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear peter,
You are very upset that your parents don’t permit you to attend a hip-hop training course on the weekend.                                                           
                                                                         
Yours,
Jack
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