题目
题型:不详难度:来源:
内容重要包括:
1. 投诉原因:漏墨水,一写字就漏出一滴滴墨水污渍;
随信退还这支笔;
提议处理办法。
注意:
1.词数100左右:
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.邮件开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:墨水污渍blot 友谊商场 Friendship Shopping Centre
Dear Manager ,
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
答案
On October 5th,I bought one of the pens named “Apollo” for 15dollars from Friendship Shopping Centre。
Unfortunately,I have been unable to use the pen because it blots and fails to wirte.I’.m very disappointed with my purchase.
According to thw telephone instruction of your customers service, I’m returning the pen to you and enclose it with the letter for you to handle the complaint properly.
Please arrange for the pen to be fixed or or replace it with a new pen, and send it to me as soon as possible.
Yours’ sincerely,
LiHua
解析
试题分析:考查应用文中的书信的写作。这是一封投诉信,要求要点要全面包括,不能有遗漏和省略。但是要点只是提纲,考生还要在此基础上增加细节,同时注意谋篇布局的顺序,运用合适的连接词连接全文,同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。审题时注意本文使用一般现在时,描述要尽量选择简洁的语言,运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型,可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词被句子连接起来,这样文章显得更连贯。
【亮点说明】Unfortunately,I have been unable to use the pen because it blots and fails to wirte.I’.m very disappointed with my purchase.这句话用的是原因状语从句, According to thw telephone instruction of your customers service, I’m returning the pen to you and enclose it with the letter for you to handle the complaint properly.这句话用了词组:According to,Please arrange for the pen to be fixed or or replace it with a new pen, and send it to me as soon as possible.这句话用的是arrange for sb to do。
核心考点
试题【假定你是李华,于十月五日在本市的友谊商场购买了“派克”牌钢笔一支,请写一封投诉信给经理。内容重要包括:1. 投诉原因:漏墨水,一写字就漏出一滴滴墨水污渍;随信退】;主要考察你对写作等知识点的理解。[详细]
举一反三
内容要点:
表示歉意
理由:去机场接从法国回来的舅舅
询问:是否有讲座录音,以便补听讲座
注意: 1. 词数:100词左右
2. 可根据内容适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
3. 参考词汇:请假--- ask for leave of absence
弥补--- make up for
Dear Miss Morgan,
I’m so sorry that
Thank you.
Yours sincerely ,
Li Hua
有市民向记者报料:网上有人代写暑假作业, 且参与代写的学生大多是在校大学生。“枪手”透露:代写作业收入可观。引起了各方说法。你作为记者将此事报道在某教育报上。学生 | 作业太多找人代劳很无奈。 |
家长 | 强烈反对这种做法,只会耽误孩子的学业。 |
老师 | 暑假作业应因人而异:老师在布置作业时应该根据不同成绩的学生设置不同的作业, 这样既能对学生有所帮助也能减轻学生负担。 |
专家 | 代写作业害人不浅。老师不能把暑假当成学期的延伸,布置作业应尽量少,让学生在暑假得到充分的休息。 |
【写作内容】
市民报料网上代写作业现象;
各方说法。
【写作要求】
1. 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】
句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯
Florence Chadwick was a great swimmer. However, not all of her efforts worked out. In addition to working hard, she had a secret for success. At the age of 34, her goal was to become the first woman to swim from Catalina Island to the California coast. However, in 1952, the sea was like an ice bath and the fog was so dense that she could hardly see her support boats. Her body was numb(麻木) and she had been swimming for nearly 16 hours. Against the cold grip of the sea, she struggled on—hour after hour—while millions watched on national television. Alongside Florence, in one of the boats, her mother and her trainer offered encouragement. They told her it wasn’t much farther. But all she could see was fog. They urged her not to quit. She never had… until then. With only a half mile to go, she asked to be pulled out. Still warming her chilled body several hours later, she told a reporter, “Look, I’m not excusing myself, but if I could have seen land I might have made it.” It was not tiredness or even the cold water that defeated her. It was the fog. She was unable to see her goal. Two months later, she tried again. Despite the same dense fog, she swam with her faith intact(未受影响的)and her goal clearly pictured in her mind. She knew that somewhere behind that fog was land and this time she made it!【写作内容】
你准备参加学校最近组织的一次英文演讲比赛,主题是“The Value of Goals”。在准备演讲时,你读到上面的文章,给你很大的启发。请准备一份演讲稿。开头部分已给出,但不计入总词数。
1、以约30个词概括短文的要点;
2、然后以约120个词谈谈你对“目标的重要性”的看法,内容包括:
1)你读完这个故事的感受;
2)谈谈你是如何理解目标在人生当中所起的作用的;
3)鼓励大家要树立目标,并为目标的实现而努力。
[写作要求]:
1.在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子;
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
[评分标准]:概括准确、语言规范、内容合适、篇章连贯
Several days ago, I came across a story about Glorence Chadwick, __________
描述雾霾 (frog and haze) 对身体和生活造成的不良影响。
建议民众和政府分别采取哪些具体行动来维护空气质量。
提示:开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入字数。
Ladies and gentlemen,
I feel it a great honor to have a chance to give a speech here, talking about…
写作要点:
1、感恩父母;
2、对父母的期望;
3、自己学习的打算。
Dear Mom and Dad,
Tomorrow is my birthday and the annual college entrance examination is around the corner. On this special occasion, _____________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
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