题目
题型:不详难度:来源:
有市民向记者报料:网上有人代写暑假作业, 且参与代写的学生大多是在校大学生。“枪手”透露:代写作业收入可观。引起了各方说法。你作为记者将此事报道在某教育报上。学生 | 作业太多找人代劳很无奈。 |
家长 | 强烈反对这种做法,只会耽误孩子的学业。 |
老师 | 暑假作业应因人而异:老师在布置作业时应该根据不同成绩的学生设置不同的作业, 这样既能对学生有所帮助也能减轻学生负担。 |
专家 | 代写作业害人不浅。老师不能把暑假当成学期的延伸,布置作业应尽量少,让学生在暑假得到充分的休息。 |
【写作内容】
市民报料网上代写作业现象;
各方说法。
【写作要求】
1. 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】
句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯
答案
One possible version:
Some citizens told reporters that some do summer homework for middle school students on line and those who do homework for middle school students are mostly college students, who reveal that they are well paid by doing homework for others. The phenomenon has aroused different opinions . In many students" view, there is so much homework that they have no choice but to ask others to do it but parents strongly oppose the behaviour, saying that it will delay the children"s studies. Some teachers suggest summer homework should vary from student to student and that teachers should assign different homework according to the student with different grades, thus not only helping them a little but also lessening their study burden. Some experts believe that doing homework for others does great harm to students and that teachers should give as little homework as possible and let the students have enough rest during the summer vacation instead of regarding summer vacation as the extension of the learning semester.
解析
试题分析:
首先要仔细审题,要点是以提纲形式出现的,做题时包括以下几个方面:(1)层次结构,(2)句子的时态(3)内容要点。尤其是内容要点要把握准确到位,要点需要考生拿捏准确以及正确,这加大了写作难度。再者考生要注意尽可能使句子的表达形式多样化,适当的使用一些高级句式和高级词汇,以提高书面表达的档次和可读性。因为只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。又要包括所有的要点,考生要多使用复杂句,一句话中多包含些信息。【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少,比如do summer homework, have no choice but to, does great harm to,还运用了who引导的定语从句等等。并注意了句子的衔接如:In many students" view;thus等等。
考点:
核心考点
试题【有市民向记者报料:网上有人代写暑假作业, 且参与代写的学生大多是在校大学生。“枪手”透露:代写作业收入可观。引起了各方说法。你作为记者将此事报道在某教育报上。学】;主要考察你对写作等知识点的理解。[详细]
举一反三
Florence Chadwick was a great swimmer. However, not all of her efforts worked out. In addition to working hard, she had a secret for success. At the age of 34, her goal was to become the first woman to swim from Catalina Island to the California coast. However, in 1952, the sea was like an ice bath and the fog was so dense that she could hardly see her support boats. Her body was numb(麻木) and she had been swimming for nearly 16 hours. Against the cold grip of the sea, she struggled on—hour after hour—while millions watched on national television. Alongside Florence, in one of the boats, her mother and her trainer offered encouragement. They told her it wasn’t much farther. But all she could see was fog. They urged her not to quit. She never had… until then. With only a half mile to go, she asked to be pulled out. Still warming her chilled body several hours later, she told a reporter, “Look, I’m not excusing myself, but if I could have seen land I might have made it.” It was not tiredness or even the cold water that defeated her. It was the fog. She was unable to see her goal. Two months later, she tried again. Despite the same dense fog, she swam with her faith intact(未受影响的)and her goal clearly pictured in her mind. She knew that somewhere behind that fog was land and this time she made it!【写作内容】
你准备参加学校最近组织的一次英文演讲比赛,主题是“The Value of Goals”。在准备演讲时,你读到上面的文章,给你很大的启发。请准备一份演讲稿。开头部分已给出,但不计入总词数。
1、以约30个词概括短文的要点;
2、然后以约120个词谈谈你对“目标的重要性”的看法,内容包括:
1)你读完这个故事的感受;
2)谈谈你是如何理解目标在人生当中所起的作用的;
3)鼓励大家要树立目标,并为目标的实现而努力。
[写作要求]:
1.在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子;
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
[评分标准]:概括准确、语言规范、内容合适、篇章连贯
Several days ago, I came across a story about Glorence Chadwick, __________
描述雾霾 (frog and haze) 对身体和生活造成的不良影响。
建议民众和政府分别采取哪些具体行动来维护空气质量。
提示:开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入字数。
Ladies and gentlemen,
I feel it a great honor to have a chance to give a speech here, talking about…
写作要点:
1、感恩父母;
2、对父母的期望;
3、自己学习的打算。
Dear Mom and Dad,
Tomorrow is my birthday and the annual college entrance examination is around the corner. On this special occasion, _____________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
期待的解决办法:1.退货退款;2.修理或调换。
注意:1.字数不得少于100字,开头结尾不计入总字数;
2.可适当增加细节,试行文连贯;
3.参考词汇 录音笔 recording pen
Dear Sir or Madam,
Best wishes,
Yours,
li Hua
随着经济的发展,城市交通问题越来越严重。请根据下列提示,写一篇短文,并谈谈自己的看法。现状:1. 高峰期交通堵塞,浪费时间;
2. 难找到停车的地方,空气质量差。
解决方式:
1. 多建地下停车场,大力发展公共交通;
2. 增强环保意识,使用替代能源。
注意:1. 文章必须包括主要内容,过渡自然。 2. 参考词汇:awareness
3. 词数120左右
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