题目

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假如你是新华中学的李明，你的美国朋友Tony来到了中国，给你发邮件说下周要来你所在的城市天津参观，你感到非常高兴，请根据以下提示，给他回一封邮件。
1．问清到达时间，你要去火车站接他。
2．邀请他到你家住宿，给他讲一下天津的发展和风俗人情(customs)。
3．建议充当向导(guide)，第二天带他去参观自己的中学和南开大学。
注意：
1．词数不少于100；
2．请勿提及真实学校姓名；
3．可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；
4．开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
Dear Tony,
I am very-excited to hear that you are coming to our city for a visit, and I can"t wait to see you.
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Best wishes to you and look forward to your early reply.
Yours ever.
Li Ming

答案

Dear Tony，
I’m very excited to hear that you are coming to my city for a visit, and I can’t wait to see you.
You say you will arrive by train, and I’m planning to meet you at the railway station. so please write to tell me the number of the train you take and the exact time when you arrive at the station. Besides, I wonder if you’d like to stay in my home while you are in Tianjin so that I can tell you about the development of our city as well as the customs and cultures here. As you are a stranger to our city, it will be my honour to act as your guide. I can show you around my high school and the famous Nankai University on the following day.
Best wishes to you and look forward to your early reply.
Yours ever,
Li Ming

解析

试题分析：本文是书信类作文，你的美国朋友Tony来到了中国，要求写信给Tony，安排有关事宜，，文章的要点也基本上都给出来了，而且很具体，考生要把要点解释清楚，不能有遗漏。在写作的过程中，要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，如强调句，倒装句等，让文章更上档次。同时在列举措施的时候要使用合适的连接词如：First，second， Besides, What’s more等，让文章看起来很有条理，也很流畅。本篇文章在写作时不要啰嗦，力求简洁。
【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁，应用了一些较好的词组和句子：：show sb around带某人参观， look forward to盼望， You say you will arrive by train, and I’m planning to meet you at the railway station. so please write to tell me the number of the train you take and the exact time when you arrive at the station.这句话用了两个定语从句， I wonder if you’d like to stay in my home while you are in Tianjin so that I can tell you about the development of our city as well as the customs and cultures here. 这句话用了宾语从句，目的状语从句，和as well as，As you are a stranger to our city, it will be my honour to act as your guide. 这句话用了it做形式主语还有文章还使用了Besides,这样的关联词，使文章更加连贯。