题目

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假如你是李华，你打算明年作为交换生到美国Michigan University去学习。你从网上得知一家美国机构提供寄宿家庭的信息。因此你给他们发一封电子邮件，邮件主要内容
包括：
1你对房屋类型及位置的要求；
2，要求免费提供一些生活设施；
3．期望月租；
4期盼尽快回复。
注意.1.词数l00左右；
2开头和结尾已写好，但不计入总词数；
3可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir or Madam.
I"m going to study in Michigan University as an exchange student next year.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

答案

Dear Sir or Madam.
I"m going to study in Michigan University as an exchange student next year.
Having learned from your website that you provide accommodation information for overseas students, I’m writing to look for a suitable host family. My requirements are as follows:
First of all ,I’d like to have my own single room, which is comfortable for me to stay in. second，the flat should be in the centre of the city, where the traffic is convenient for me to go around. Third, I’d appreciate it if the host family could provide a washing machine and some essential equipment for free so that I can wash my clothes and cook my meals, Besides, the monthly rent should be no more than $300.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

解析

试题分析：本文是书信类作文，你打算明年作为交换生到美国Michigan University去学习。要求给一家提供寄宿家庭信息的美国机构发一封电子邮件，文章的要点也基本上都给出来了，而且很具体，考生要把要点解释清楚，不能有遗漏。在写作的过程中，要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，如强调句，倒装句等，让文章更上档次。同时在列举措施的时候要使用合适的连接词如：First，second， Besides, What’s more等，让文章看起来很有条理，也很流畅。本篇文章在写作时不要啰嗦，力求简洁。
【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁，应用了一些较好的词组和句子：as follows 如下，look forward to 盼望，no more than不多于， Having learned from your website that you provide accommodation information for overseas students, I’m writing to look for a suitable host family. 这句话用了现在分词的完成式做状语， I’d like to have my own single room, which is comfortable for me to stay in. second，the flat should be in the centre of the city, where the traffic is convenient for me to go around. 这里用了两个定语从句， I’d appreciate it if the host family could provide a washing machine and some essential equipment for free so that I can wash my clothes and cook my meals,这句话用了it做形式宾语和结果状语从句，还有因为用了First of all ，second， Third, Besides, 这篇文章读起来很顺畅。