题目
题型:不详难度:来源:
结 果 | 原 因 |
89%选择不去 | 父母不允许 学习太忙,没时间 不知道自己能做什么工作 |
11%选择去 | 学以致用 积累社会经验 减轻父母的压力 |
注意: 1.词数100左右;
2.可适当拓展内容以使行文连贯。
开头已经给出,但不计入总数。
Recently our school has carried out a survey about whether students will do some part-time job during the winter holiday.
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答案
Recently our school has carried out a survey about whether students will do some part-time job during the winter holiday.
89% of the students said no. First, their parents won’t allow them to do so. Second, they are so busy with their studies during the holiday that they can’t afford the time to do it. Third, they are not sure what job they can do. 11% of the students planned to work during the winter holiday. They think working is a good chance to put what they have learned into practice. Through work, they can gain lots of social experience. In addition, by doing a part-time job to earn some money, they can reduce their parents’ pressure..
解析
试题分析:这是一篇典型的议论文体的写作,它以表格的形式提出了论点(寒假兼职的优点和缺点)和论据,还以文字提示形式提出了话题(寒假是否会去做兼职赚钱)及需要考生自由发挥的部分(你的看法),自己的看法可选择上述中的任何一种,并就此发表个人的见解。本文的重点是表格中两种方式的优,缺点,根据题目的特点,以三段式的形式来写作比较好。根据内容,尽管讨论已经发生,但它是就一般的暑假假期计划而进行的讨论,没有特定的时间界定,因而考生应以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。相当一部分考生用一般过去时进行论述,这会失掉较多的分数。从题目所给的开头可知应用第一人称来写。
【亮点说明】文章结构层次清楚,观点明确,语言表达准确,多用词组和句式: Allow sb. to do “允许某人做”,. they are so busy with their studies during the holiday that they can’t afford the time to do it. 这句话用了so…that…句型, they are not sure what job they can do. They think working is a good chance to put what they have learned into practice. 这两句话用了宾语从句还有范文还使用了 First, Second, Third, In addition,这些关联词使文章更加连贯。
考点:考查议论文写作
核心考点
试题【你们学校最近做了一项调查,调查的主题是”你寒假会去做兼职挣钱吗?”下面是调查结果:结 果原 因 89%选择不去父母不允许学习太忙,没时间不知道自己能做什么工作 】;主要考察你对写作等知识点的理解。[详细]
举一反三
现状 | 身体素质逐年下降,肥胖人数增多 |
原因 | 学习紧张,体育锻炼少,较少参加家务等体力劳动,饮食不均衡 |
专家建议 | 少上网聊天,保证睡眠每天运动一小时,多吃蔬菜水果,不吃垃圾食品 |
请根据以上信息写一篇英语短文,在英文校报上投稿。内容包括:中学生的健康现状、原因及专家建议。
【写作要求】
注意:1.词数:100左右.
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
Last week,we made a survey about middle school students" health condition.
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要点提示:
教育方面:学生在家上课,利用电脑做实验,在线交作业;
生活方面:手机和电脑的使用更加广泛,手机可以取代银行卡进行消费;
交通方面:私人飞机广泛使用,汽车只要有合适的程序就可以去任何地方。
Life in 2060
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1.安全意识的重要性;
2.校内潜在的一些人身安全隐患,如: 体育运动时,和同学发生矛盾时等情况。
3.你对解决这些问题的积极建议。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
注释: 校园安全: safety at school
My dear classmate,
Whether our school campus is a safe place to stay on means a lot to both teachers and students.______________________________________________________________________
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【写作内容】
1. 广场舞是一种很好的保持身心健康的方式。
2. 有些同学认为广场舞音乐引起的噪音严重影响了人们的生活和学习,理应禁止。
3. 一些同学则认为,人们有权选择自己喜欢的健身娱乐方式,可调低音量,限制时间。
4. 解决措施: ⑴ 学会互相理解,彼此尊重;
⑵ 政府该为市民提供足够的活动空间等。
*参考词汇:广场舞 square dancing
【写作要求】
1. 只能用5个句子表达全部内容。
2. 文章的开头和结尾已经给出,但不算字数。
【评分标准】
句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章连贯。
Dear Editor,
I’m writing to tell about the discussion we’ve had about the conflicts between square dancers and the residents nearby.
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Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
More than five years I was working at a little clinic after I graduated from college. Actually I didn’t like the job and felt depressed every day. One day while working at the cash register, an elderly couple came in with a little girl in a wheelchair.
As I looked closer at this girl, I realized that she was disabled. I then realized she had no arms or legs, just a head, neck and torso. She was in red. That is a warm color.
As I took the money from her grandparent, I looked down at the girl, who was giving me the cutest, largest smile I have ever seen. All of a sudden her handicap was gone and all I saw was this beautiful girl, and her smile, just like the warm sun in the winter melted me and almost instantly gave me a completely new sense of what life is all about.
It was her smile that took me from a poor, unhappy college student and brought me into her world; a world of smiles, love and warmth.
Now I’m a successful business person and whenever I get down and think about the troubles of the world, I think about that little girl and the remarkable lesson about life that she taught me.
【写作内容】
1.以约30个词概括这篇短文的内容要点。
然后以约120词就“生活态度”这一话题发表你的看法,内容包括:
上述故事给你的感受与启发;
举例说明你生活中遇到过让你改变生活态度的人或事;
你认为生活态度对我们的生活有何重要意义。
【写作要求】
1.可以使用实例来支持你的论点,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子;
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】
概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,语篇连贯。
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