题目
题型:不详难度:来源:
1.安全意识的重要性;
2.校内潜在的一些人身安全隐患,如: 体育运动时,和同学发生矛盾时等情况。
3.你对解决这些问题的积极建议。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
注释: 校园安全: safety at school
My dear classmate,
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答案
Dear classmates,
Whether our school campus is a safe place to stay on means a lot to both teachers and students. And the campaign “safety at school” launched recently will make us aware that safety should always come first whatever we do.
Accidents can happen easily at school. When doing sports, we might get injured. When decorating our classroom standing on the desk, we might fall to the ground and get hurt. When having disagreement with our classmates, we might quarrel and cause fighting.
So, I think, to follow our PE teachers’ advice can avoid unnecessary injures in PE class. And it will be helpful to have some students around when we have to do things on high places. Besides, quarrelling or even fighting is not a wise choice to solve the disagreement with our classmates since it may bring suffering and pain to us mentally and physically.
Thanks.
解析
试题分析:这是一篇话题类作文。假定你是李华, 你们学校最近开展了创建“平安校园”的活动。你们班为此组织主题班会,请你就如何创建“平安校园”在班会上谈谈你的想法。发言应包括下面的内容:1.安全意识的重要性;2.校内潜在的一些人身安全隐患,如: 体育运动时,和同学发生矛盾时等情况。3.你对解决这些问题的积极建议。需要写的内容已经粗略给出,需要我们翻译成完整通顺的句子,适当添加些内容,使文章更充实。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,不能出现文章脱节问题。一定要给出自己的看法。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型为文章润色。注意要求的词数100词左右,不要太多也不要太少。
【亮点说明】Whether our school campus is a safe place to stay on means a lot to both teachers and students.这里含有一个主语从句;And the campaign “safety at school” launched recently will make us aware that safety should always come first whatever we do.这里含有一个宾语从句。
核心考点
试题【假定你是李华, 你们学校最近开展了创建“平安校园”的活动。你们班为此组织主题班会,请你就如何创建“平安校园”在班会上谈谈你的想法。发言应包括下面的内容:1.安全】;主要考察你对写作等知识点的理解。[详细]
举一反三
【写作内容】
1. 广场舞是一种很好的保持身心健康的方式。
2. 有些同学认为广场舞音乐引起的噪音严重影响了人们的生活和学习,理应禁止。
3. 一些同学则认为,人们有权选择自己喜欢的健身娱乐方式,可调低音量,限制时间。
4. 解决措施: ⑴ 学会互相理解,彼此尊重;
⑵ 政府该为市民提供足够的活动空间等。
*参考词汇:广场舞 square dancing
【写作要求】
1. 只能用5个句子表达全部内容。
2. 文章的开头和结尾已经给出,但不算字数。
【评分标准】
句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章连贯。
Dear Editor,
I’m writing to tell about the discussion we’ve had about the conflicts between square dancers and the residents nearby.
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Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
More than five years I was working at a little clinic after I graduated from college. Actually I didn’t like the job and felt depressed every day. One day while working at the cash register, an elderly couple came in with a little girl in a wheelchair.
As I looked closer at this girl, I realized that she was disabled. I then realized she had no arms or legs, just a head, neck and torso. She was in red. That is a warm color.
As I took the money from her grandparent, I looked down at the girl, who was giving me the cutest, largest smile I have ever seen. All of a sudden her handicap was gone and all I saw was this beautiful girl, and her smile, just like the warm sun in the winter melted me and almost instantly gave me a completely new sense of what life is all about.
It was her smile that took me from a poor, unhappy college student and brought me into her world; a world of smiles, love and warmth.
Now I’m a successful business person and whenever I get down and think about the troubles of the world, I think about that little girl and the remarkable lesson about life that she taught me.
【写作内容】
1.以约30个词概括这篇短文的内容要点。
然后以约120词就“生活态度”这一话题发表你的看法,内容包括:
上述故事给你的感受与启发;
举例说明你生活中遇到过让你改变生活态度的人或事;
你认为生活态度对我们的生活有何重要意义。
【写作要求】
1.可以使用实例来支持你的论点,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子;
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】
概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,语篇连贯。
★ 收到钱和书后能重返校园,非常感激;
★ 在老师的帮助下,学习有了很大的进步,受到老师的表扬和鼓励;
★ 决心更加努力学习,取得更大的进步;
★ 盼望见到Mr. Brown,希望他寄来一张照片。
注意:1. 书信应包括以上所有要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;2. 词数:100左右
注意:1. 词数100左右.
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
3. 开头已给出,但不计入总词数.
目的 | 提供交流平台 | |
内容 | 要点 | 细节 |
加强交流 | 结识朋友…… | |
提供帮助 | 学习,生活…… | |
献计献策 | 学校发展,校园生活…… |
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1. 可能会遇到的困难:语言方面的障碍、饮食的不习惯、想家、孤独等;
2. 鼓励他并表示愿意帮助他。
注意:1. 词数:100字左右。
2. 信的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Wang Ping,
I’m glad to hear from you. You asked me about the difficulties you may meet with when you get here
in the UK. ____________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
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