题目

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请根据下面提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。
Everyone hopes to succeed  overnight, but we should be    aware that “ a journey of a thousand miles begins with the first step” .
注意: ①无须写标题；
②除诗歌外，文体不限；
③内容必须结合你生活中的一个事例；
④不得透露个人姓名和学校名称； 
⑤词数不少于120，如引用提示语则不计入总词数。

答案

One possible version:
With competition becoming increasingly fierce, everyone dreams about succeeding overnight,but success may be a long process, in which you must work hard step by step.
Here is an experience that deeply impressed me.
Three years ago, when I came to the high school, I was poor in English. I wanted to conquer it in a short time but I failed just because of the lack of a solid foundation. Helped by my teacher, I decided   to start   from the beginning, attaching importance to standard pronunciation, basic vocabulary and practical grammar. Moreover, I made it a rule to recite five sentences each day. Then, the longer I learnt, the more progress I made. Now what I"m proud of is that I"ve won a prize in English Talent Competition.
Judging from    the experience, I firmly   believe that on   the way   tosuccess ,there are no lifts or elevators but steps and stairs.

解析

试题分析：本文是篇半开放性作文。有部分的文字提示给出了一个讨论的话题是“千里之行始于足下”；从自己生活中的一些小事中举一到两个小的例子来进行说明。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。
【亮点说明】本文结构明确，思路清晰。分三段把内容要点都涵盖了。同时注意应用较高级的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如in which you must work hard step by step. because of the lack of a solid foundation，,there are no lifts or elevators but steps and stairs.，还运用了Judging from    the experience.非谓语动词作状语等等。并注意了句子的衔接如：Moreover，Then,等等。