题目

帮我看一下英语作文
应该有很多错的地方,
Many parents think students shuold go to cram school on weekends.W e shuold not to go out with friends.But I think it is great pressure for teenagers to learn,we shuold be allowed to go out with friends on weenkends.After studying for a week,we meed to have some of their time.I think it would be helpful for our study,and we can learn more from our friends about some interesting things.Even if allowed,we must also pay attetion to safety.
掉了一个词But I think it is great pressure for teenagers to learn,we shuold be allowed to go out with friends on weenkends，relax。

提问时间：2021-04-06

答案

1.Many parents think students shuold go to cram school on weekends.W e shuold not to go out with friends.change to:Many parents think that students shuold go to cram school on weekends and they shuold...