题目

求大神检查是否有语法错误
Iwoke up from the pain and my mind was a blank. I vaguely remembered that, in mydream, I was standing on a large stage; I could hear the graceful music frompiano. I dance to the beautiful music and I was warmly applauded by theaudience because of my beautiful dancing. But suddenly, I was standing on a road,I saw a car rushing toward me, and then, I woke up in a ward.

“Whatwas happened? Why am I here? ” I triedto sit up but I couldn’t feel my legs. I looked around in horror but I couldnot see anyone. Suddenly, the door was opened. I saw my mother was standing inthe door way. Her face was haggard. “Mom?” I asked carefully. When my mother heard myvoice, her reddened eyes were filling with tears once again. Sheright up to my bed and looked at me. “Mom,what was happened?” I asked anxiously. I could feel something awful happened. Sureenough, mom told me that I cannot dance anymore because of that car accident. Thatmeant I could not attend to the international dan

提问时间：2021-04-01

答案

I woke up from the pain and my mind was blank.I vaguely remembered that,in my dream,I was standing on a large stage.I could hear the graceful music from a piano.I danced with the beautiful music and I was warmly applauded by the audience because of my enticing dancing.But suddenly,I was standing on a road and saw a car rushing towards me,and then,I woke up in a ward.
“What happened?Why am I here?” I tried to sit up but I couldn’t feel my legs.I looked around in horror but I could not see anyone.Suddenly,the door was opened.I saw my mother standing at the door.Her face was haggard.“Mom?” I asked carefully.When my mother heard my voice,her reddened eyes were filling with tears once again.She went to my bed and looked at me.“Mom,what was happened?” I asked anxiously.I could feel something awful happened.Mom told me that I cannot dance anymore because of that car accident.That means I could not attend the international dance competition in the day after tomorrow.“You were in coma for two whole days,” she said in a trembling voice,“I worried that you couldn’t wake up and I would never see you again!” I couldn’t help crying after I know I could not dance anymore.I was hopeless for the future.My world was full of darkness;I didn’t know how to move forward.