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谁能帮我改下英语演讲稿?3分钟,大二的.题目Wisdom in the Mind is Better Than Money in the Hand
Good afternoon everybody!It’s my honor to stand here today,and I’m very glad to share the topic” wisdom in the mind is better than money in the hand.”
Maybe someone will say now that we possess enough money,why should we study or work hard?So why?
There is no doubt that we can buy something we treasure by money.But money in the hand is limited after all,it will be run out one day.Maybe you will say”ask from our parents”.But what about the future?
Nevertheless,wisdom differs from money.It is not transitory but permanent; it is not boastful but authentic.Wisdom remains in our own brain,it belongs to ourselves.We can easily utilize it.So we draw a vital conclusion that wisdom can make money,but conversely money can’t buy wisdom.
As Boccaccio said,” Human wisdom is the source of happiness.” Only with wisdom arming our brain can we realize how to balance what we get and what we lose,also can we kno

提问时间：2021-04-01

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我觉得写得很不错啊 有倒装句 还用了许多固定句型 和短语 内容很充实 也似乎没有什么错别句子