题目

英语高手进来帮忙改改语法错误!
Good morning,dear teacher.It's a fine day today,and I'm very glad to be here for this interview.First of all,let me introduce myself.My name is ***,I was born on *****.I came from ****,a famous city with a long history.I'm a North man,Therefore,I have the northerner's Integrity,simple and frank character.I am graduating from the College of Economy Law of Northwest University of Political & law this July.In my spare time,I have broad interests like many other youngers.Frequently I exchange with other people by making comments in the forum on line.I am skillful in seaching for information in internet.I am a NBA fan for years.Los Angeles Lakers is my favorite team.
In the past one year I try my best to prepare for the postgraduate examination.Now,all my hard work has got a result beacause I have got a chance to be interview by you.Through four years of university study,I have a system of jurisprudence theoretical knowledge.Recognizing that the subject is a strong theoretical and practical subjects and having a strong interest in this subject.I think ,at present,I can do many things in a superficial level,but legal knowledge is profound,I am not competent to do things professionally owing to lack of ample knowledge and ability .so I hope that I can have the chance to further deepen my knowledge of law through the next three years postgraduate study.
Legal are playing a more and more important role in our modern society.So as a professional law student,should be more in-depth theoretical study for further services in Legal Practice.
OK,that’s all.Thank you very much.

提问时间：2021-04-01

答案

(dear teacher.)应该不止一个老师,后面加s.--dear teachers
(It's a fine day today)语法没错,但是把fine换成nice会比较好.在结尾换成句号.然后接下来这一句“and I'm very glad to...”去掉and.
（I was born on .
(I'm a North man) North的意思是北方,这里你应该要用形容词北方的,所以改为“I'm Northern man.”
先发着这一些,我等一会在继续帮你看.