题目

英语小小作文挑错~
The NIRVANA
I dont't know why so many people like them very.Or maybe i just can't enjoy their music...
One of my friend told me that he love this band very much.Then I seach sth about them and I found many people love their music!So I want to know why.I listened some songs of them tonight.I try to find some songs I like!But I couldn't .To be honest,I don't like that kind of music very much.They're not sounds bad but I just don't like.Maybe I'm opinionated because I just heard a few songs of them.Maybe I'm not have a right of comment because I nearly don't understand music.I'll listen more music of them and then maybe I'll like their music because of knowing them.
Do not make a comment too fast before you know it,I think.
这里面应该有很多语法错误才对> <
如果可以的话希望能有一些写作建议,比如其他的表达法等等

提问时间：2021-03-24

答案

I dont't know why so many people like them very.
首先don't写错了,very也不能放在句尾,应该去掉
Or maybe i just can't enjoy their music...
I大写,其他没错,但觉得不太通顺,如果你想说"或许我只是不懂得欣赏他们的音乐",你可以说maybe I don't know how to appreciate their music 更好一些
One of my friend told me that he love this band very much.
应该是one of my friends,told为过去式,后面时态一致应为loved
Then I seach sth about them and I found many people love their music!
搜索是search 不是seach,整句话时态都不清楚,前面search是一般现在时,后面found是过去式,再后面love又为现在时,应统一.
So I want to know why.
这句对了
I listened some songs of them tonight.
应该是listened to
I try to find some songs I like!
应该是tried
But I couldn't .To be honest,I don't like that kind of music very much.
To be honest?你是不是想说"说句实话",那应该表达为 In fact,后面用very much不妥,最好说I don't like that kind of music at all,我一点也不喜欢那种音乐.
They're not sounds bad but I just don't like.
这里错了,应该是they don't sound bad,而不应该用被动
Maybe I'm opinionated because I just heard a few songs of them.
也许我自以为是因为我只听了一点,heard应该改成listened to,一点点应该是few而不是a few.
Maybe I'm not have a right of comment because I nearly don't understand music.
应该是I don't have a right comment,后面对了
I'll listen more music of them and then maybe I'll like their music because of knowing them.
listen后面加to,后面没有语法错误
Do not make a comment too fast before you know it,I think.
没错
我觉得你的英语表达能力应该注意训练啊,虽然有些看起来是对的,但是读起来很不通顺,应该避免写成中国式英语,希望你继续努力.