题目

这篇toefl作文能拿多少分
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In order to become well-informed,one has to get information from different news resources.
Perhaps no issue in this world is as significant as information to people ,because it affects everybody in their daiy lives.It has caused wide public concern all over the world.There are various reponses people have on this issue.Some people hold the opinion that one has to get information from different new resources in order to become well-informed.However,this idea is being questioned by more and more people who point out that we can get information just from one particular resource.From my point of view,I disagree with the former statement because getting information from different new resources has more advatanges.There are numerous reasons why I maintain this viewpoint,and among the various reasons are two important ones.
The first and the foremost reason is that from different news resources,such us,telev

提问时间：2021-03-24

答案

总体来说比较清晰,但是可以尝试更加简洁,并不是说字数越多越好,有的句型虽然字数多,但是看着有点绕.另外可以尝试替换某些词和句型,譬如说第一段的because就极其多啊,换一些表示原因的词,比如for,since之类的.一些大...