题目
帮忙评一下分,高中英语作文
假定你是李华,你班同学决定为小明举办生日聚会.请你写信邀请外教Susan参加,要点包括:1.时间:周五晚八点至九点
2,地点:学生俱乐部
3,内容:生日歌,蛋糕,游戏
Hi Susan,
We're throwing a surprise party for Xiaoming' birthday(开头已给出)
I’m writing to invite you to the party.And there is something significant you should know:to The party is be held in Students' Club on Friday.It will start at 8:00 pm and last for about an hour.Besides,it will include singing berthday song,eat cake,as well as playing game.We hope that you will accept our invitation and carry a present if it is convenient for you.
You're welcome to come to the great ball.
30分的作文
假定你是李华,你班同学决定为小明举办生日聚会.请你写信邀请外教Susan参加,要点包括:1.时间:周五晚八点至九点
2,地点:学生俱乐部
3,内容:生日歌,蛋糕,游戏
Hi Susan,
We're throwing a surprise party for Xiaoming' birthday(开头已给出)
I’m writing to invite you to the party.And there is something significant you should know:to The party is be held in Students' Club on Friday.It will start at 8:00 pm and last for about an hour.Besides,it will include singing berthday song,eat cake,as well as playing game.We hope that you will accept our invitation and carry a present if it is convenient for you.
You're welcome to come to the great ball.
30分的作文
提问时间:2021-03-23
答案
朋友你好!很高兴帮你:
问题1:to The party is be held in Students' Club on Friday
应该为:
To the party is be held in Students' Club on this Friday.
(要说明是本周五晚,要不然容易产生歧义,还有大小写问题)
问题2:It will start at 8:00 pm and last for about an hour
应该为:It will start at 8:00 pm and finish at 9:00 pm. And it will take one hour on holding this party!
(注意要完全按照要求写,最好直接写出是几点到几点,如果要写持续多长时间可以另起一句!)
问题3:建议从We hope开始分段写.
问题4:最后一句You're welcome to come to the great ball.可改为:We are extremely happy to see you come to the party!
评分:本文要点齐全,但是部分语句不恰当或者不太通顺,而且没有一些与众不同的精彩句子,但是表达意思明确,要是满分15分可以得到9分!(望采纳!祝你学习进步哦)
问题1:to The party is be held in Students' Club on Friday
应该为:
To the party is be held in Students' Club on this Friday.
(要说明是本周五晚,要不然容易产生歧义,还有大小写问题)
问题2:It will start at 8:00 pm and last for about an hour
应该为:It will start at 8:00 pm and finish at 9:00 pm. And it will take one hour on holding this party!
(注意要完全按照要求写,最好直接写出是几点到几点,如果要写持续多长时间可以另起一句!)
问题3:建议从We hope开始分段写.
问题4:最后一句You're welcome to come to the great ball.可改为:We are extremely happy to see you come to the party!
评分:本文要点齐全,但是部分语句不恰当或者不太通顺,而且没有一些与众不同的精彩句子,但是表达意思明确,要是满分15分可以得到9分!(望采纳!祝你学习进步哦)
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