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Today,there is no consensus yet on whether intelligent students should be taught as an independent group and be educated separately.In this essay,I will compare and contrast two perspectives on this issue.Personally,I am in favor of “brainy students should be distinguished from others”.
Some argue that teaching bright students distinctly carries certain benefits.They may point out doing so enables students to avoid the waste of human resource.For instance,intelligent students have a high IQ that can learn faster than others; they can only get a little knowledge if they are taught with others.Also,it is generally accepted that efforts to school clever students separately help intelligent students to better receive knowledge that they had never learned.Moreover,it is different that every student,we cannot use the same measure to school them.Most importantly,the fact that educating distinctly can afford the students suitable knowledge makes this view even more compelli
Today,there is no consensus yet on whether intelligent students should be taught as an independent group and be educated separately.In this essay,I will compare and contrast two perspectives on this issue.Personally,I am in favor of “brainy students should be distinguished from others”.
Some argue that teaching bright students distinctly carries certain benefits.They may point out doing so enables students to avoid the waste of human resource.For instance,intelligent students have a high IQ that can learn faster than others; they can only get a little knowledge if they are taught with others.Also,it is generally accepted that efforts to school clever students separately help intelligent students to better receive knowledge that they had never learned.Moreover,it is different that every student,we cannot use the same measure to school them.Most importantly,the fact that educating distinctly can afford the students suitable knowledge makes this view even more compelli
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Today,there is no consensus yet on whether intelligent students should be taught as an independent group and be educated separately.
(group or be……)
Some argue that teaching bright students distinctly carries certain benefits.("brings"is a better word than "carries")
They may point out doing so enables students to avoid the waste of human resource.(point out that by doing so enables the economy to avoid the wastage of……)
intelligent students have a high IQ that can learn faster than others; they can only get a little knowledge if they are taught with others.(……with high IQ can……; ……get little knowledge……)
Also,it is generally accepted that efforts to school clever students separately help intelligent students to better receive knowledge that they had never learned.(……generally accoknowledged that separating the clever studends from the rest in the educational course can help them learn at a faster rate and hence receiving more knowledge)
Moreover,it is different that every student,we cannot use the same measure to school them.(Moreover,every student is unique and we cannot use the same teaching method to educate them.)
Most importantly,the fact that educating distinctly can afford the students suitable knowledge makes this view even more compelling.(Most importantly,the fact that educating each student individually can help develop his or her unique strength and talent makes this view more convincing.)
Apparently,teaching students separately and personally can be very stimulating if it is for learning instead of just for teaching easily.
(Apparently,teaching students separately and personally can be very beneficial for the purpose of learning)
Some other may think there should be no difference between intelligent students and normal students,they should not be educated separately.(However,some may think that there is no much differences ……,and thus they should not……)
It is true that we should have no discrimination,students are all students.(……that we should not have discrimination towards the talented and the less talented.They have equal rights of being educated.)
It is entirely possible normal students would become disappoint and weariness of study if they were treated unfairly.(The less talented students may be discouraged if they receive unfair treatment in eduication.)
But,as Albert Einstein said,“the greatest in danger in modern technology is not that machines begin to think like people,but that people begin to think like machines.” (Yet,Albert Einstein has said……)
Our own experience informs us students should be treated differently because they are different.(Our own experience teaches us that……)
Overall,my conclusion is that some students whom are intelligent,we should teach the different from the other normal students,and use a suitable measure.(In conclution,the talented should be tought differently using suitable teaching method.)
Pls improve your expression.
(group or be……)
Some argue that teaching bright students distinctly carries certain benefits.("brings"is a better word than "carries")
They may point out doing so enables students to avoid the waste of human resource.(point out that by doing so enables the economy to avoid the wastage of……)
intelligent students have a high IQ that can learn faster than others; they can only get a little knowledge if they are taught with others.(……with high IQ can……; ……get little knowledge……)
Also,it is generally accepted that efforts to school clever students separately help intelligent students to better receive knowledge that they had never learned.(……generally accoknowledged that separating the clever studends from the rest in the educational course can help them learn at a faster rate and hence receiving more knowledge)
Moreover,it is different that every student,we cannot use the same measure to school them.(Moreover,every student is unique and we cannot use the same teaching method to educate them.)
Most importantly,the fact that educating distinctly can afford the students suitable knowledge makes this view even more compelling.(Most importantly,the fact that educating each student individually can help develop his or her unique strength and talent makes this view more convincing.)
Apparently,teaching students separately and personally can be very stimulating if it is for learning instead of just for teaching easily.
(Apparently,teaching students separately and personally can be very beneficial for the purpose of learning)
Some other may think there should be no difference between intelligent students and normal students,they should not be educated separately.(However,some may think that there is no much differences ……,and thus they should not……)
It is true that we should have no discrimination,students are all students.(……that we should not have discrimination towards the talented and the less talented.They have equal rights of being educated.)
It is entirely possible normal students would become disappoint and weariness of study if they were treated unfairly.(The less talented students may be discouraged if they receive unfair treatment in eduication.)
But,as Albert Einstein said,“the greatest in danger in modern technology is not that machines begin to think like people,but that people begin to think like machines.” (Yet,Albert Einstein has said……)
Our own experience informs us students should be treated differently because they are different.(Our own experience teaches us that……)
Overall,my conclusion is that some students whom are intelligent,we should teach the different from the other normal students,and use a suitable measure.(In conclution,the talented should be tought differently using suitable teaching method.)
Pls improve your expression.
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