题目
初中生写的词(英语) 找错
the girl always with long hair,and she always so graceful
In the crowd,every time I glance recognize her
but,he always with her
She told me to say hello,smiling at me
i seem to see the morning
i feel the never had the happiness
very happiness,
You know it's true
I don't care what people think
I just want to waiting for you
Waiting for you again smiling at me
I'll take you home
I play with you
I gave you song
i feel the never had the happiness
very happiness,
you gave me
Like sunshine of happiness
you gave me
happiness
I don't know how to declare
that's true,true,yeyeyeyey~e,
i feel the never had the happiness
very happiness,you gave me
求改正 -
the girl always with long hair,and she always so graceful
In the crowd,every time I glance recognize her
but,he always with her
She told me to say hello,smiling at me
i seem to see the morning
i feel the never had the happiness
very happiness,
You know it's true
I don't care what people think
I just want to waiting for you
Waiting for you again smiling at me
I'll take you home
I play with you
I gave you song
i feel the never had the happiness
very happiness,
you gave me
Like sunshine of happiness
you gave me
happiness
I don't know how to declare
that's true,true,yeyeyeyey~e,
i feel the never had the happiness
very happiness,you gave me
求改正 -
提问时间:2021-03-14
答案
the girl always with long hair,and she always so graceful
错误原因:缺少谓语动词,也被称作限定动词
改正:the girl is always with long hair,and she is always so graceful
In the crowd,every time I glance recognize her
这句话中,every time I glance是时间状语,它只是作为整个句子的一个成分,所以这句话少主语,应该再加个I,另外可以调整下语序
改正:In the crowd,I recognize her every time I glance
but,he always with her
错误原因同第一句
改正:but,he always stays with her.
She told me to say hello,smiling at me
这句话表达意思不明确,如果楼主想表达“她朝我微笑并跟我打招呼”,建议这样写:Once,she said hello to me,smiling at me.其中smiling是分词形式,它可以替代两个并列的小句,这个句子= she said hello to me and smile at me.但是第一种写法更好
i seem to see the morning
如果是叙述一件已经发生过的事情,应该用过去式,把seem改为seemed
i feel the never had the happiness
feel改为 have felt.整个句子调整为 I have never felt so happy.
very happiness
这一句可以不要了,没什么意义
You know it's true
I don't care what people think
这句话是正确的
I just want to waiting for you
记住搭配:want to do sth.
所以改为:I just want to wait for you
Waiting for you again smiling at me
waiting 改为 wait,这里不能用分词形式
I'll take you home
I play with you
I gave you song
以上三个句子写在一起:I'll take you home,play with you and sing for you.
i feel the never had the happiness
这个句子调整为:I have never felt so happy before
very happiness,
you gave me
Like sunshine of happiness
以上三个句子表达的意思为:你给我的快乐像是阳光.调整为:
the very happiness you gave me is like sunshine which can bright my life.我又润色了一下:你给我的快乐像是阳光,照亮了我的生活
you gave me
happiness
看的出这是一首情诗,语法错误都已经修正了,但文采还要加强.
错误原因:缺少谓语动词,也被称作限定动词
改正:the girl is always with long hair,and she is always so graceful
In the crowd,every time I glance recognize her
这句话中,every time I glance是时间状语,它只是作为整个句子的一个成分,所以这句话少主语,应该再加个I,另外可以调整下语序
改正:In the crowd,I recognize her every time I glance
but,he always with her
错误原因同第一句
改正:but,he always stays with her.
She told me to say hello,smiling at me
这句话表达意思不明确,如果楼主想表达“她朝我微笑并跟我打招呼”,建议这样写:Once,she said hello to me,smiling at me.其中smiling是分词形式,它可以替代两个并列的小句,这个句子= she said hello to me and smile at me.但是第一种写法更好
i seem to see the morning
如果是叙述一件已经发生过的事情,应该用过去式,把seem改为seemed
i feel the never had the happiness
feel改为 have felt.整个句子调整为 I have never felt so happy.
very happiness
这一句可以不要了,没什么意义
You know it's true
I don't care what people think
这句话是正确的
I just want to waiting for you
记住搭配:want to do sth.
所以改为:I just want to wait for you
Waiting for you again smiling at me
waiting 改为 wait,这里不能用分词形式
I'll take you home
I play with you
I gave you song
以上三个句子写在一起:I'll take you home,play with you and sing for you.
i feel the never had the happiness
这个句子调整为:I have never felt so happy before
very happiness,
you gave me
Like sunshine of happiness
以上三个句子表达的意思为:你给我的快乐像是阳光.调整为:
the very happiness you gave me is like sunshine which can bright my life.我又润色了一下:你给我的快乐像是阳光,照亮了我的生活
you gave me
happiness
看的出这是一首情诗,语法错误都已经修正了,但文采还要加强.
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