题目

求专家帮我批改一下雅思作文,最好能给个评分,4月30号考啊~写作要到六分要怎样提高啊?
Task2：Some teachers think students should be organised into groups to study.Others argue students should study alone.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In contemporary society,increasingly issues about education of students are causing great concern.Some teachers believe that studying alone is a better way to exercise students’ learning ability.This argument may be true.However,I am personally tend to the opinion that students should be organized into group to study together.
There are several arguments contributing to the view that student should study together.To begin with,students who are organized into group may effectively enhance their efficiency in study.Specifically,when students meet with some problems in the process of leaning,they can help each other.For example,in some classes,teachers encourage students to learn together or discuss a question in small group,which help students to acquire the important know

提问时间：2021-01-14

答案

看到第一句就知道你有用慎小嶷的书.
大致看了一下 我觉得这篇还不错 6分绝对没问题!
我不是专业英语人士啦~不过怎么说也考了n次雅思 很有经验啦~
写作6分不难的
希望你考试成功啦!