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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way for governments to control energy conservation is to raise the prices of gasoline and electricity.
Control, the ability or powers to make someone or something do what you want, which always be used by authority, can’t make people really do the things what the government want. Despite of that some people argue that power can let the people under control, others hold the opposite idea and claim that power will never have a long control to people. in my point of view, the best way for government to conserve the gasoline and electricity can’t be to raise the price. My reasons are explored in detail as following.
The first and fore most reason that government shouldn’t use the tough way to control the energy. In early twentieth century, US government has a clause that banned the wine. That clause caused not only let people who love drinking to go to speakeasies or speaks, but also gave the cha

提问时间：2021-01-03

答案

说实话吧,我觉得最多得3分.自始至终,我没有看到明确的“为什么不能通过提价来保护能源”,你总是在打擦边球,绕来绕去的,不切题.第一段的那个举例我看不出来如何与你的论点联系.第二段的解释一是不够详细,二是我不知道...