题目

帮忙看一下考研英语作文
Form the first picture ,we can see the flower is stadies a house.The second picture ,we can know the theflower is facing out wind an rain.The picture tell us that people must undergo many pain and difficulty.Only in this way,can we become strong.
There are many reasons examplining the phenomenon.Take the film Gone whit Wind as a typical example.On the on hand,many successful people experience a lot of Wind and Ruin in the live.On the other hand,more and more parent excessively protect themselves kid.We must undrestand that excessive protecting is a hurt.So parent should encourage kid to face various difficulty.
We getting what form the picture?Consider all the reasons,I think that we ought to understand some think.First,peopeo have to encounter mang hard.Second,we need to keep an optimistic and hard work or study.Therefore we must learn face various pain.
开头写的现在进行时对不对,不对应该怎么写.其他的地方有什么毛病谢谢.这次没有分了请大家包含感谢.

提问时间：2020-12-30

答案

看了下你的这篇,没看完,毛病还是蛮多的,比如：the flower is stadies(stady,此处作形容词) a （at)house； many pain and difficulty：a lot of pain and many difficulties；reasons （for) examplining the phenomenon；Take the film Gone；excessive protecting is a hurt：is harm就行了
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