题目

英语翻译
Josh Woodward’s song is belongs to folk music.This is the first time I heard his singing,I listen to this song again and again as I was carriedaway by his song.
He sang the songs to the guitar.His voice sounds tender and sophisticated,his voice would fit any kind of ballad.The melody,pure and understated,unfolds softly and pleasingly.
I also like the change in pace and mood.Josh Woodward proved to be a great singer,and he showed off his vocalin his ballad songs.I want to download more his songs from internet,and share his songs to my friend,I think they will like his songs,too.

提问时间：2020-12-13

答案

用一般现在时就好了
is belongs to改为belongs to

I (加上have) heard his music:it is the/my ...(1st,2nd...) time (that) +现在完成时
be carried away 情感色彩会偏向不太好的方面,最好改一下：be fascinated(attracted) by
to the guitar 不对,可以说sing while playing the guitar(边弹边唱）
改一下这句,变成：His voice sounds so tender and so sophisticated that it could fit any kind of ballad.
The melody,（加上which sounds) pure and understated
Josh Woodward proved himself an awesome singer更好
 and he shows his wonderful voice off in his ballad songs
more （of) his songs from (the) Internet
to my friend,这里的逗号错了,要改成分号或句号I think they will like his songs,too.
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