题目

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现在有的家长为了鼓励孩子好好学习，用金钱来奖励孩子在学业上的表现。如：考试成绩优良或在各种比赛得奖的，每次奖励100元甚至几千元元不等。请你谈谈对此现象的看法。
写作内容要点还应包括：
1) 你的父母（或亲戚等）是怎样鼓励你学习的；
2) 你认为除了金钱，怎样才能鼓励孩子更好地学习。
要求：1.可适当增加细节,以使文意通顺；
2.词数120左右；
3.开头已给出（不计入词数）。
Nowadays, some parents like to reward their child with a certain amount of money if he/she performs well in school. For example, _______________________________________
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答案

Nowadays, some parents like to reward their child with certain amount of money if he/she gets a good grade or wins a contest. For example, if a child scores over 90 in any subject, or wins a contest, he/she may be rewarded from 100 to 2000Yuan.
This is quite common now and does stimulate some students to work hard and achieve success. Furthermore, it is welcome by many young people.
However, this is not the only way to study successfully. As I remember, my parents told me some stories about some ancient scholars, encouraging me to learn from them. Whenever I made progress, they would praise me generously. When I met with difficulties, they would listen to me carefully and gave me suggestion.
I think it’s very important to be self-motivated. It’s a must for one to form a good habit of studying, too. These may help students to learn happily.

解析

本文是对父母用钱来奖励孩子的学习这一现象进行的讨论，是一篇半开放性的文章。要靠考生自己梳理要点，并转换成英文。在谈及你的父母如何鼓励你，可以举一些父母奖励书本，奖励旅游这些更有价值的奖励。在写作的时候注意使用合适的连接词，高级的句型和高级的词汇，让文章更有条理，更有文采。