题目

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假若如你是新华中学的学生李华。周五下午，你最喜欢的Carter教授将举行题为“How to be a good language learner”的报告，但你因在新东方（New Orient）培训学校学习不能参加。请你根据以下提示给你的同学David写一封电子邮件：
1.解释原因：
2.表达遗憾；
3.要求Daivd对报告内容录音。
注意：
1.词数：120字左右。
2.可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。

答案

Dear David，
How are you?
I"ve learned that Prof Carter is going to give us a talk on “How to be a good language learner next Friday afternoon. He is my favorite teacher, you know, but unfortunately, I won"t be able to attend the lecture as I am now studying English in New Orient Training School in Beijing, and I won"t get back when the lecture begins. So I wish you could give me a hand to make up for the loss. Could you please make a recording of the lecture? At least I can listen to the lecture when I go back, and moreover, if I have any questions, I hope to get satisfactory answers from you. I would appreciate it if you could do me the favour. Many thanks.
Look forward to seeing you again soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

解析

试题分析：这是一封电子邮件，写的时候用书信的格式，内容要点给出了一个提纲，要考生自己拓展，要选择合适的词汇和句型表达文章需要的意思，可以变换使用一些容易驾驭的句子或者词汇实现同样的目的。So I wish you could give me a hand to make up for the loss.这句话使用了虚拟语气, I would appreciate it if you could do me the favour.这句话的it做形式主语用的很好，还要使用合适的连接词来连接各要点，使文章成为一个整体。
点评：除了注意书信的格式，表达方式的选择和要点的完备也很重要，要点不能有遗漏或者省略。也不能按照表格写出提纲式，所以在写作的时候要变换句式，同时要注意因为是邮件要写得亲切直白。不要过去堆砌。