题目
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Sally was a college student in London. She wanted to buy her mother a nice and useful birthday present, but not too expensive.
One day after a quick and simple lunch, she went shopping. Having looked for half an hour, she came across a shop selling umbrellas at a good price. So she decided to take one.
She thought, “Mom can carry it when she is wearing clothes of any color.” Then she bought a lovely black umbrella and took it to school with her until her class finished.
On her way home in the train that evening she felt hungry, so she went to the buffet car. She left the black umbrella above her seat. But when she got back, she found it was gone!
Sally burst into tears. The other passengers felt very sorry for her and asked what was wrong. When she explained the black umbrella she had bought for her mother had disappeared, and that she had to get off at the next station, the three other passengers asked her for her mother’s address so that they could send the umbrella to her in case someone returned it after Sally got off the train.
The next week, Sally got a letter from her mother saying “Thank you very much for your lovely presents, but why did you send me three black umbrellas?”
[写作内容]
1. 以约30个词概括短文的要点;
2. 然后以约120个词写一篇短文,并包括如下要点:
(1) 所读故事对你的启发;
(2) 记叙一个与该故事中Sally或陌生人的行为相类似的故事;
(3) 你对亲人的感恩或对他人善心的感激。
[写作要求]
1. 在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子;
2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
3. 标题自定。
[评分标准]
概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,篇章连贯。
答案
Sally, a college student, bought her mother an umbrella as a birthday present but lost it on the train. Moved by her kindness and respect for her mother, some passengers on the train sent her mother three umbrellas.
Sally loved her mother and remembered her mother’s birthday. As a 17-year-old girl, I love my mother very much as well. I send my mother flowers on Mother’s Day. Last year, on mother’s 45th birthday, I bought my mother a very good comb from store. When I showed it to my mother and told her it was good for her health to comb her hair often, she burst into tears and then smiled to my father and me. Never had I imagined that a simple gift would make her so moved.
Mother’s love is the most precious in the world. I think we can show our love for our mother by doing small things. What is most important is to our love every day.
One possible version:
Love and get loved
Some strangers sent Sally’s mother three umbrellas after they saw Sally in tears because she had lost the umbrella she would send her mother as a birthday present.
From the story of three umbrellas, we can see that people will love you in return if you give love to others. When I was 16 years old, I was in hospital for a small operation. It was difficult for me to reach out my hands for drinks or food. An old lady who was taking care of her husband in the room often came to my bedside to help me. Furthermore, she often told funny stories and made my days there full of joy. She prepared delicious soup for me and her husband. I have been very grateful to her for all that she did. Last year, at her 56th birthday, I sent her a big birthday cake and spent a good day at her home. Love is a two-way street. Love others, and then you will get loved.
解析
试题分析:这篇书面表达给了一段材料:先要求以约30个词概括上文的主要内容,再以约120个词写一篇短文,内容包括:((1) 所读故事对你的启发; (2) 记叙一个与该故事中Sally或陌生人的行为相类似的故事; (3) 你对亲人的感恩或对他人善心的感激。这道题目要求比较严格,所以在写作之前一定要看清题目。题目还要求1.作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。写作时尽量使用自己不会的单词、词组和句型,同时也要注意使用一些高级语法和句型,使自己的文章更有文采。
点评:本文属于根据原文内容写作,动笔前,一定要认真阅读原文,并理解内容。认真看清题目要求,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累,写作联系以外,还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文,这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
核心考点
试题【Three UmbrellasSally was a college student in London. She wanted to buy her moth】;主要考察你对写作等知识点的理解。[详细]
举一反三
写作要点:
1. 网上购物的优点 2. 网上购物的缺点 3.你的建议
要求:
1. 短文词数不少于100(不含已写好的部分)。
2. 内容充实,结构完整,语意连贯。
3. 书写需清晰、工整。
With the rapid development of the Internet, Internet shopping is becoming a popular way of shopping. ___________________________________________________________________________________
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信的内容包括以下几点:
钱和礼物已收到,非常感谢。
自己一直努力学习。多亏老师和同学们的帮助,学习取得很大的进步。
曾受到老师的表扬和父母的鼓励。
决心继续努力,学好各门功课,将来当一个科学家。
渴望见到Mr. Smith,但因为没有机会去上海,希望给她寄张照片。
注意:
词数:100左右。
不要逐句翻译。可适当增加细节使行文连贯。
提示:1、与人接触时要面带微笑、对别人又好。
2、关心同学、乐于助人。
3、学会倾听很重要,这样别人乐于和你相处。
4、积极参加班级活动并展示自己才能。
5、……(你的建议)
才能:talent
注意:1.词数130左右,信的格式已给出,但不计入总词数;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Lin Hao,
Yours,
Li Hua
1.上个礼拜,我去公园玩,进大门后碰巧遇上几位从美国来遂宁旅游的大学生。
2.你向他们打招呼并交谈,然后带着他们游览公园。大家玩的很开心。出来的时候,在大门外你又帮他们买了些东西。
3.美国朋友向你表示了感谢,之后你们便分手了。
4.谈谈自己的感受。
注意:
1.写作应包括以上文字涉及的各项内容。
2.为使写作流畅,在不影响主题表达完整准确的前提下,允许必要的增减与发挥。
3.词数80—100,开头已给出
假如你校开展了中学生学习生活的讨论,请根据以下提示发言:
1. 合理安排学习和生活 2. 融洽同学之间的关系 3. 积极参加校园社团活动
注意:字数120—150
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