题目
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Here are some comments on Li Hua from his classmates.
Lily said, "Li Hua is the smartest student in our class and usually scores the highest marks in the English and mathematics exams. His homework and assignments are always done to a very high standard so our teachers ask us to follow his example. We all admire his intelligence."
Kate said, "Li Hua is really a hard-working student. He spends at least four hours every day reviewing his lessons and his homework is never late. As the exams get closer he becomes even more diligent and works into the early hours of the morning, making sure he has gone over all of the information covered in our classes."
John said, "Li Hua is the kind of person who is easy to co-operate with. Although he"s very clever he is still willing to listen to others" opinions and take their suggestions. When we do groupwork in class we all want to be in his group because he always does his share of the work and is easy to get along with."
Tim said, "Li Hua is the class monitor and the most helpful student in our class. He always makes sure the classroom is kept clean and assists the teacher in handing out and collecting the students" books and homework. When a student is absent from school he will call and tell them what they have missed."
【写作内容】
假设你叫李平,你的同学李华拟申请到美国某大学学习。申请材料需包括同伴的推荐信。李华邀请你为他写一封推荐信。上文是其他同学对李华的一些评价,请根据这些材料和你自己对李华的看法,写一封推荐信。以下是信的内容(信的开头和结尾已经为你写好):
1. 以约30个词概括同学们眼中李华的特点和优点;
2. 以约120个词表达你对李华的看法,并包括如下要点:
⑴ 你对同学们评价意见的看法;
⑵ 以你和李华之间的经历来说明其中的一点看法。
【写作要求】
1. 作文中可使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子;
2. 信中不能出现真实的姓名和学校名称。
答案
I am writing this letter to support my good friend Li Hua"s application to study at your university. In my classmates" eyes, he has always been an intelligent and hard-working student, who is helpful and co-operative with others. For these reasons, he is very popular with everyone.
I agree with my classmates and I have personally benefited greatly from his help. I still remember at the beginning of this school year I was in a traffic accident and that required me to be in hospital for over two months. This situation caused me great concern as I feared I would fall far behind my classmates in this very important year of study. But thanks to Li Hua by the time I was well enough to leave hospital and return to work I was up-to-date in all areas of my study. Not only did he come to visit me every day, bringing with him all the lessons and materials our class had gone through each day, but he patiently sat with me and explained to me all those issues that I didn"t understand. Only after staying with me for at least 2 hours every day would he go home and begin his own studies.
For the reasons above, I urge you to consider his application favourably.
解析
试题分析:考查半开放性作文。李华的优点可以用:聪明,勤奋,善于合作等等。考生可以自行选择一个身边的实例作为蓝本说明你和李华之间的经历,考生可以适当拓展并发挥想象,从而使文章的叙述不单调。写作时认真审题,并在脑海中回想自己积累的哪些句式、句型、单词能用进来,这些单词、句型都应是经典的,不会错的。写的过程中,多注意灵活使用定语从句,包括非限制性定语从句。
点评:半开放性作文给出了一个话题,并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时,首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型,在你的能力范围之内,选择句式时要赋予变化,因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词,把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体,如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候,可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采,也能增加得高分的可能性。
核心考点
试题【阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。Here are some comments on Li Hua from his classmate】;主要考察你对写作等知识点的理解。[详细]
举一反三
1. 首先,健康的饮食习惯很重要;
2. 母亲确保你吃得健康( make sure );
3. 你不喜欢甜食 (have a sweet tooth) ,吃更多水果、蔬菜和鱼;
4. 其次,锻炼也很必要(take exercise);
5. 你酷爱足球,(be crazy about)是班队的队长并且每天至少锻炼两小时。
注意:1. 词数80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总次数。
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯流畅。
75%的学生不参加体育锻炼 | 1. 不爱好体育锻炼; 2. 无锻炼场地; 3. 学习负担重。 |
25%的学生参加体育锻炼 | ...... |
1.词数120左右;
2.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Rose,
As we enter Senior Three, fewer and fewer students do physical training. ____________________
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Best wishes!
Wang Cheng
要点提示:
1、在课堂上经常听见手机的铃声;
2、有的同学还在课堂上发短信息。
注意:1、要求作适当发挥,使信的内容充实、语言连贯流畅;
2、词数:120
3、开头已给出
4、参考词汇:手机的铃声the ringing of mobile phones 短信short messages
Dear principal,
I’m Li Hua, a student in Senior Grade One. Recently some students bring their mobile phones to the classroom and…
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要点: 要求:
1. 有益于身体健康 1.150词左右
2. 培养团队合作能力 为班级贡献自己的力量 2.能用到一句强调句 一句倒装句
3. 丰富自己的校园生活 增加亮点 3.注意卷面书写
4. 重在参与 提前准备
Dear schoolmates,
The annual sports meeting is approaching. ________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________
the Athletic Department of the Student Union
写信理由
1.垃圾食品含脂肪,糖太高,对身体有害;
2.垃圾食品会导致癌症,心脏病;
3.塑料垃圾袋使得校园脏乱差。
你的建议
1. 早餐时间,课间关闭超市 2. 提倡学生养成良好的饮食习惯
注意:1.可适当增加细节,使短文连贯、通顺;
2.短文的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数;
Dear President,
I’m LiHua in Grade one. Recently, I have noticed most of students have bought junk food from supermarket in stead of breakfast. I really worry about it.
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