题目

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写作（25分）
假设你是新华中学的学生张华,班里从外地转来一名同学李明,他一时无法融入新的班集体中,感到很苦恼。请根据下列要点用英语给他写一封信:
1. 帮他分析原因
2. 给他提出建议
3. 陈述你帮助他的具体打算
Dear Li Ming,
I’m sorry to know that you feel distressed at your new class.__________________________
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答案

Dear Li Ming,
I’m sorry to know that you feel distressed at your new class. One of the reasons, I believe, is that you might be too shy to talk confidently with your classmates. Maybe you are afraid that your classmates will make fun of your accent. Therefore it is natural for you to feel lonely occasionally.
I believe, with your effort, you can manage to overcome these difficulties. To start with, you may as well learn to speak Putonghua, well understood by all the Chinese. Besides, comparing notes with your classmates frequently is a good way for you to make new friends.
In our spare time, I’ll invite you to play basketball or go to some parties. Also, I’d like to introduce my good friends to you. I hope you can adapt to the new school life as soon as possible.
Best regards,
Zhang Hua

解析

试题分析：考查应用文中的书信的写作。要求用英文根据下列要点用英语给从外地转来一名同学李明写一封信。要点都已经给出，信件要点包括：帮他分析原因，给他提出建议，陈述你帮助他的具体打算，审题时注意时态的选择，描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。象范文的One of the reasons, I believe, is that you might be too shy to talk confidently with your classmates.使用了表语从句，还有comparing notes with your classmates frequently is a good way for you to make new friends.用了动名词做主语。还要用适当的连接词被句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯Therefore ，Besides等。
点评：书信类短文的关键在于要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略。同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。