题目
题型:不详难度:来源:
A young man was slapped in the face until he bled because he didn’t offer his seat to a woman with a baby on a bus in downtown Hangzhou. Later he was proved to be a disabled person.
In a series of cases nationwide, we see people being beaten for refusing to give up their seats on public transport, which seems to be a moral problem about correct behavior and self-sacrifice.
People with moral deficiency (who don’t give up their seats to deserving people) can be condemned, but they don’t deserve to be treated with violence because they offend moral values and not laws. In comparison, the attackers behave worse.
The attackers regard relying on violence as their only choice if people ignore their appeals to give up their seats. It seems they start a shout or a fight for the sake of justice, but can they still think of their personal intention when they call violence justice?
This “violent justice” can confuse many people and encourage them to do the same, especially when we are overpowered by illogical mood.
If cruel and rude acts are rooted in children’s hearts, society will never step into civilization. The practice violates common values, neither solving problems nor safeguarding civilized society.
【写作内容】
1、以约30个词概括短文的要点。
2、以约120个词谈谈你对这一事件的看法,内容包括:
1)读完这则新闻,你有什么感受?
2)假如你是车上的一名乘客,你会怎样做?
3)就如何创建和谐社会提出你的建议。
【写作要求】
你可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不要抄袭阅读材料中的句子。
【评分标准】
概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,篇章连贯。
答案
I am so upset that in our society the woman with a baby should be so implite. it was wrong of her to get her justice with violence, which really will do great harm to our society.
Today in our society ,many other people like her would take it for granted that they should be offered a seat on the crowded bus, as the morality requires. However, it I were a passenger on the crowded bus, I would stand out to tell her that the young man is also in need of help because of his disability。So it is still a long way for us to build up a harmonious society. i my opinion, we should fight against the violent justice and try every means to avoid it from happening so as to solve such kind of problems an safeguard our civilized society
解析
试题分析:这篇书面表达给了一段材料:先要求以约30个词概括上文的主要内容,再以约120个词写一篇短文,内容包括:(1)读完这则新闻,你有什么感受? 2)假如你是车上的一名乘客,你会怎样做? 3)就如何创建和谐社会提出你的建议。这道题目要求比较严格,所以在写作之前一定要看清题目。题目还要求你可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不要抄袭阅读材料中的句子。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。写作时尽量使用自己会的单词、词组和句型,同时也要注意使用一些高级语法和句型,使自己的文章更有文采。
点评:本文属于根据原文内容写作,动笔前,一定要认真阅读原文,并理解内容。认真看清题目要求,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累,写作联系以外,还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文,这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
核心考点
试题【阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。A young man was slapped in the face until he bled b】;主要考察你对写作等知识点的理解。[详细]
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②介绍拉萨(Lhasa)的一所高中。
注意:1.词数:100左右
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入词数。
3.参考词汇:礼堂auditorium
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A young man was complaining about his bad luck and poverty. He frowned (皱眉) all day. A wise old man came to him and said, “Hey, kid, why are you so unhappy?”
“I don’t understand why I"m so poor!” he replied.
“Poor? I think you are very wealthy!” the wise old man said sincerely.
The young man was puzzled, “Why do you say that?”
“Supposing someone offers you one thousand dollars to cut your finger off, would you do it?” “Of course not!” the young man replied.
“And ten thousand dollars to chop your leg off?” “Certainly not!”
“A hundred thousand dollars to scoop your eyes out?” “Surely not!”
“One million dollars to turn you into a 90-year-old man immediately?”
“Definitely not!”
“Ten million dollars to take your life right away?” “Absolutely not!”
The wise old man said with a smile, “So there you are. You already possess what is worth more than ten million dollars. Why are you still sad to be so poor?” After the young man listened to the wise old man"s words, it started to become clear to him.
[写作内容]
1. 以约30个词概括文章的主要内容;
2.然后以“健康比金钱更重要”为题发表自己的,字数大约120左右,内容包括:
(1) 对话中这位年长智者的观点是否正确,为什么?
(2) 健康与金钱的关系,并试举例说明;
(3) 作为一名高中生,应该如何处理健康与金钱的关系。
[写作要求]
1.在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子;
2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
[评分标准]
概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,篇章连贯。
[写作内容]
要点:1. 节日时间和意义
2. 回忆一件母亲做的让你印象深刻的事
3. 今年的母亲节你打算如何做
[写作要求] 作文中不能出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称。
[评分标准] 句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。
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