题目
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Health Magazine做了一项调查,了解到现在人们的健康状况在下滑,主要原因如下:
1.工作忙碌,压力过大,缺少锻炼;
2.生活没有规律,熬夜,休息不够;
3.不少人有抽烟、喝酒的习惯,
4. 对空气、水和食品的污染加剧;
5.建议:适时放松,多运动,培养良好的生活习惯,戒烟,戒酒,保护环境。
【写作要求】只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。
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解析
试题分析:考生首先要仔细审题,包括以下几个方面:(1)层次结构,(2)句子的时态(3)内容要点。尤其是内容要点要把握准确到位,这是半开放性作文,要点需要考生拿捏准确以及正确,这加大了写作难度。再者考生要注意尽可能使句子的表达形式多样化,适当的使用一些高级句式和高级词汇,以提高书面表达的档次和可读性。因为只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。又要包括所有的要点,考生要多使用复杂句,一句话中多包含些信息,如范文里面的句子:a number of people have got into the habit of smoking and drinking alcohol, and the pollution to the air, water and food has got more serious.就包含了几个要点内容。
点评:作文要层次清晰,要点全面,表达流畅,切合作文要求,句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。文中使用一些极佳的词语和句子为文章增色,使用高级词汇及句型。
核心考点
试题【【写作内容】Health Magazine做了一项调查,了解到现在人们的健康状况在下滑,主要原因如下:1.工作忙碌,压力过大,缺少锻炼;2.生活没有规律,熬夜,】;主要考察你对写作等知识点的理解。[详细]
举一反三
Self – discipline (自律)
An elderly carpenter (木匠)was ready to retire. He told his employer his plans to leave the house building business and live a more leisurely (悠闲的) life with his wife. The employer was sorry to see his good worker go and asked if he could build just one more house as a personal favor. The carpenter said yes, but in time it was easy to see that his heart was not in his work. He built the house carelessly and used inferior (较差的) materials. It was an unfortunate way to end his career (职业). When the carpenter finished his work and the employer came to inspect (视察)the house and handed the front-door key to the carpenter. "This is your house," he said, "my gift to you."
What a shock! What a shame! If he had only known he was building his own house, he would have done it all so differently. Now he had to live in the home he had built none too well.
So it is with us. Think of yourself as the carpenter. Build wisely. It is the only life you will ever build. Your life tomorrow will be the result of your attitudes and the choices you make today.
1.以约30个词概括本文的故事;
2.以约120个词写一篇短文,包括如下要点:
(1)你读短文后的感想;
(2)叙述你的一次真实或虚构的对某一件事高度自律或负责的经历;
(3)那次高度自律或负责的经历对你的影响。
1.文中可使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事,可也以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子。
2.信中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,篇章连贯。
Never be afraid of making mistakes. Actually, making progress is making mistakes. Mistakes reveal(揭示、显示) where success lies.
注意:(1)无须写标题,不得照抄英语提示语;
(2)除诗歌外,文体不限;
(3)文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;
(4)词数120左右。
假设你是李华,你的美国朋友Peter打算今年暑假来中国西藏旅游,请你根据下表内容用英语向他简单地介绍有关西藏的一些基本情况。
[写作内容]
归属 | 中华人民共和国 |
地理位置 | 中国西南方,被誉为世界屋脊(Roof of the World) |
人口 | 约2,800,000 |
面积 | 120多万平方公里 |
省会 | 拉萨(Lhasa),被誉为世界上最高的城市 |
特征 | 700多年的悠久历史;有很多享誉海内外的名胜,如布达拉宫the Potala Palace。 |
发展 | 1951年5月23日解放(liberation)以来,西藏在政治、经济、文化等方面都取得了很大的进步。 |
1.只能使用5个句子表达全部内容;
2.信的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入句子总数。
Dear Peter.
I am so glad to know that you will come to Tibet for a visit.
I"m sure you will have a wonderful journey in such a great land.
Looking forward to your coming to China.
Yours,
LiHua
Gaby Lucy is just a 17-year-old American girl, but she has experienced life in the Dominican Republic as a volunteer. When she recalls her time volunteering there, she doesn’t think about the fact that she had no running water and lived in a small house outside. Instead, she remembers fondly the people she met, the work she did with a youth group to improve accessibility to a local library and the leadership skills she gained.
American teens are setting an example to their parents through their volunteer work, according to a new survey by Harris Interactive. The random national telephone survey released this week found that more teens volunteer to support a charitable cause(慈善事业) – 56 percent – than have a part-time job –39 percent. Parents said 82 percent of the teens in their lives do something to support charitable causes, including volunteering, inviting others to a cause or donating money.
【写作内容】
1.以约30个词概括短文的内容要点;
2.以约120个词就 “青少年从事志愿者工作” 这个主题发表你的看法,并包括以下要点:
(1) 青少年从事志愿者工作的意义;
(2) 简述一次你自己或你身边的人从事志愿者工作的经历和感受;
(3) 请你向同龄中学生发出号召。
【写作要求】
1.在作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事,但不得直接引用原文中的句子;
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
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注意:词数不少于100词。
With the development of science and technology, the way of communication has become increasingly diverse and convenient.
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