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假如你叫李华,现正在美国加利福尼亚州上大学,你的一个朋友刘英写信向你了解美国加利福尼亚州的情况,请根据以下内容提示给他回信简介加利福尼亚州。
地理方面
面积42.4万平方千米,美国西部,西濒太平洋,美国面积第三大的州
人口方面
约38,000,000人;
据说15000前印第安人首先进入;16世纪欧洲人开始进入;19世纪中世界各地的人带着发财梦进入;未来将还会有人因喜爱加州的气候和生活方式进入。
语言方面
58% 的人把英语作为母语来讲,42%的人讲其它语言。
 
*加利福尼亚州: California;太平洋:the Pacific;印第安人:Indians
【写作内容】
请根据以上内容给朋友写回信,内容包括:
1、加里福尼亚的地理方面的信息;
2、人口及其语言方面的信息;
3、信的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入句子数。
【写作要求】
只能用5个句子表达全部内容。
【评分标准】
句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章连贯。
Dear Liu Ying,
Your letter reached me yesterday. You would like me to tell you something about California, so now I am writing to you.
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If you want to know more, you may go to https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/California#History. Best wishes to you.
Yours ever,
Li Hua
答案

One possible version:
Your letter reached me yesterday. You would like me to tell you something about California, so now I am writing to you.
California, the third largest state in size in the USA with a population of more than 38 million, is located in the west of the United States on the Pacific in the west. It is said that the first settlers were Indians who got there 15000 years ago and only in the 16th century did Europeans come to settle. In the 19th century, people from all over the world came rushing into California with the dream of becoming rich. It is believed that in the future more people, attracted by the climate and lifestyle, will keep immigrating to California. As for language, only 58% of Californians speak English as their native language, while the others speak other languages.
If you want to know more, you may go to https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/California#History
Best wishes to you.                                                                                                            Yours ever,
解析

试题分析:考生首先要仔细审题,要点是以提纲形式出现的,做题时包括以下几个方面:(1)层次结构(2)句子的时态(3)内容要点。尤其是内容要点要把握准确到位,要点需要考生拿捏准确以及正确,这加大了写作难度。再者考生要注意尽可能使句子的表达形式多样化,适当的使用一些高级句式和高级词汇,以提高书面表达的档次和可读性。因为只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。又要包括所有的要点,考生要多使用复杂句,一句话中要多包含些信息。
【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少,比如would like sb to do, is located in还运用了It is said that…,It is believed that句式; who引导的定语从句及only in the 16th century did Europeans come to settle.倒装句等等。并注意了句子的衔接如:As for language等等。
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The saying goes“Attitude is everything, details determine success or failure. ”请用英语写一篇短文,谈谈自己对上述观点的一些看法。 
注意:①无须写标题,不得照抄英语提示语; ②除诗歌外,文体不限;③词数为120左右。
                                                                                        
                                                                                        
                                                                                        
                                                                                        
                                                                                        
                                                                                        
                                                                                        
                                                                                  
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阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
Children in kindergarten are learning social skills. For this reason, it’s important to tell the children what will make them become good citizens when they grow up. It’s up to parents, teachers and all others involved with a kid to teach these skills.
Teaching kids to pick up things by themselves is a good way to teach them not to throw things on the ground. For example, if a class has to make paper cutouts (剪下的图样), after cutting, have the children pick up the wastepaper and place it in the wastebasket.
The golden rule of good citizenship should be taught at this age. The rule is “One should treat others as one would like others to treat oneself”. Teachers should ask their students how they want to be treated. There are many answers, such as not being treated in bad manners. The teacher should explain that others don’t like to be scared, so you should not scare (使惊恐) others either.
Following the laws is good citizenship(公民义务). Proper games can be played in the classroom. Games have rules, and all students in the class should follow the rules of the games. If a child doesn’t want to follow, it is up to the teacher to explain them to the child. Teaching children about following rules should help them understand the need to obey the law when they become adults. 
【写作内容】
1.以约30个词概括这篇短文的内容要点;
2.不少城市在创建文明城市。请以约120个词谈我们如何成为文明市民。内容包括:
(1)你认为文明市民 (a civilized citizen) 应具备什么素质,列举两三种文明行为;
(2)作为中学生,谈谈你应如何从小事做起,为创建文明城市作贡献。
【写作要求】
1.可以使用实例来支持你的论点,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子;
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】
概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,语篇连贯。
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为了加强英语教学,我校准备高薪聘请外教来校任教。有些同学认为有必要,而有些却不以为然。请就此事给校长写封信,阐述聘请外教的利和弊,供校长参考。
要求:1. 利和弊至少各包括3个理由。
2. 字数: 120左右。
3. 开头、结尾已给出。
Dear Principal:
These days all my classmates are talking about employing foreign teachers.
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Anyway you are Principal. It’s up to you to decide whether to employ foreign teachers or not. We believe you will make a wise decision.
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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请根据以下提示,并结合事例,用英语写一篇短文。
You will never change your life until you change something you do daily.  The secret of your success is found in your daily routine.
注意:①文章开头已给出,无须写标题,不得照抄英语提示语;
②除诗歌外,文体不限;
③文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;
④词数为120左右。
Some of our daily behaviors reflect our attitude towards life.  What our life will be like is based on what we actually do at present.
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今年,你将高三毕业。为使即将升入本校的高一新生的高中生活更顺利,学校的《英语学习园地》请你给他们留言,提出一些中肯的建议。请根据下面的提示,用英语写一篇短文。
1.合理分配学习、锻炼和休息时间;
2.搞好与老帅和同学之间的关系;
3.积极参加校社团活动。
注意:1.词数:不少于100词;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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