题目

题型：不详难度：来源：

【写作内容】
时间：上周末
对象：在中国农村教书的志愿者卢安克(Eckart Loewe)
主题：他的志愿者之路
基本情况：1968年出生在德国汉堡(Hamburg)；1990年夏天，短短3个月的中国之旅，
让他深深地爱上了广西的乡村。
从教过程: （1）1999年，在广西的一个乡村成为一名志愿者教师；
（2）发现中国家长特别重视成绩却忽视孩子的天性和兴趣。
教育理念：如果一个人只是为了别人的理念而生存，他就永远找不到自我的方向和力量。
【写作要求】
只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；

答案

Last week, I was lucky enough to interview a foreign volunteer teaching in rural China, Eckart Loewe, about his way of volunteering. Eckart Loewe, born in Hamburg, Germany in 1968, began to fall in love with the countryside of Guangxi after a 3-month tour(a 3 months’ tour) in China in the summer of 1990. Ever since 1999, he has been a volunteer teacher in a village there. During the course of teaching in China, he finds that Chinese parents always pay special attention to their children’s grades, but ignore their natures and interests. In his opinion, if a person lives only for others’ ideas, he will never find the direction and power of himself.

解析

【试题分析】本文是篇简短的采访记叙文，内容提示很详细，按照提示信息，用五句话叙述完整即可。注意文章的时态，描述采访的内容用一般过去时态，记叙人物的想法等要用现在时及将来时。用第三人称单数，再有就是不能根据材料逐字逐句的翻译应该注意句子的衔接，以提高作文的档次。
【亮点说明】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。知识点运用恰当到位，文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如fall in love with ，after a 3-month tour ，pay special attention to，ignore their natures and interests等，还运用了句型结构，I was lucky enough to interview……，完成时态Ever since 1999, he has been a volunteer teacher in a village there.，定语从句So don’t do anything that will make you too excited.及状语从句if a person lives only for others’ ideas, he will never find the direction and power of himself.
等。并注意了句子的衔接如：in his opinion，等。