题目
题型:不详难度:来源:
未及时回信的原因;
你假期的打算(如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等)
注意:1. 词数:120-150;
2 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
答案
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to receive your email, and I am sorry I couldn’t reply in time since I have been preparing for the final exam recently. In your email, you asked me about my plan of the summer holidays. If it comes to a choice, I prefer to go travelling.
First, I would spend a couple of days in Japan not only to enjoy the delicious food, but to learn about people from a different cultural background. Second, walking through a well-known national park is another must on my list, where I can appreciate the creations of nature and relax myself. Finally, I would visit some museums which should not be missed to broaden my horizon as well as enriching my knowledge.
All in all, travelling is the best choice to recharge ourselves and get ready for the new challenges. Let’s just pack our suitcases and start our trip!
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
试题分析:本文是篇邮件应用文,内容提示较简洁,只是框架,但学生容易把握写作要求和写作目的。考生在写作之前必修认真审题,首先要注意文章的时态,用一般现在时和将来时。人称用第一和第二人称。根据写作要求文章分三段来写。第一段首先对不能及时回复邮件表示歉意并表明原因,之后提出自己的打算。第二段重点描述自己的具体计划和想法。第三段总结全文。再有就是不能根据材料逐字逐句的翻译应该注意句子的衔接,以提高作文的档次。
【亮点说明】文章要点齐全,表达思路明确,知识点运用恰当到位,文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少,比如in time, prefer to go travelling, cultural background, broaden one’s horizon, enrich one’s knowledge等。还运用了现在完成进行时since I have been preparing for the final exam recently;to do做目的状语not only to enjoy the delicious food, but to learn about people from a different cultural background;定语从句where I can appreciate the creations of nature and relax myself;which should not be missed to broaden my horizon as well as enriching my knowledge.等等。并注意了句子的衔接如:first, second, finally, all in all等。
核心考点
试题【假如你是新华中学的学生李华,你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件,询问你暑假里的打算,但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据以下要点给他回封邮件:未及时回信的】;主要考察你对写作等知识点的理解。[详细]
举一反三
同学的观点 | 你的观点 |
国外有较好的设备(facilities)和教学方法,跟外国学生交流可获益匪浅,在国外学习归来的人回国后肯定比国内的优秀。 | 很多出国的学生发现国外现实环境和理想其实相去甚远,更不用说获得成功了。国外生活很孤单无助,遇到问题无人帮忙。 |
1. 只能使用五个句子表达全部内容;
2. 文章中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
评分标准:句子结构准确, 信息内容完整, 篇章结构连贯。
According to a new survey, an increasing number of high school students in China choose to study abroad. And some students in my school think studying abroad is a better choice for them.
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Therefore, whether it is good or not to study abroad depends on the individual.
In 1882 a baby girl caught a fever that was so fierce that she nearly died. She survived but the fever left its mark ― she could no longer see or hear. Because she could not hear, she also found it very difficult to speak. So how did this child, blinded and deafened at 19 months old, grow up to become a world-famous author and public speaker?
The fever cut her off from the outside world, depriving her of sight and sound. It was as if she had been thrown into a dark prison cell from which there could be no release. Luckily Helen was not someone who gave up easily. Soon she began to explore the world by using her other senses.
Just before her seventh birthday, the family hired a private tutor ― Anne Sullivan. Anne was careful to teach Helen especially those subjects in which she was interested.
Helen proved to be a remarkable scholar, graduating with honours from Radcliffe College in 1904. She had phenomenal powers of concentration and memory, as well as a dogged determination to succeed. While she was still at college she wrote “The Story of My Life”. This was an immediate success and earned her enough money to buy her own house.
She toured the country, giving lecture after lecture. Many books were written about her and several plays and films were made about her life. Eventually she became so famous that she was invited abroad and received many honours from foreign universities and monarchs. In 1932 she became a vice-president of the Royal National Institute for the Blind in the United Kingdom.
【写作内容】
1. 概括短文的内容要点, 该部分的字数大约30词;
2. 就“残疾人需要我们的关心”这个主题发表你的看法, 至少包含以下的内容要点, 该部分的大约120词:
a) 以你认识或了解的残疾人为例, 简述残疾人面临的困难及其取得的成就;
b) 举例说明人们是怎样关心和帮助残疾人的, 还存在哪些不足之处;
c) 呼吁大家都来关心和帮助残疾人。
【写作要求】
可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子。
【评分标准】
概括准确、语言规范、内容合适,篇章连贯。
ETL International English Summer Camp
Volunteer Wanted
EIL was founded in Britain in 1936 with the fundamental aim of international understanding“Learn to live together by living together”.
Requirements: Over 16; good knowledge of English; outgoing; working well with children between 7-12
Activities: Language study, outdoor recreation and travel
Campers: Students from different countries
Camp site:Mount Wuyi, Fujian
Time: July 26-August 9
Application deadline: July 15, 2012
If interested, please e-mail to info@eiuk.org
假设你是李华,这则广告引起了你的兴趣,请用英文写一封自荐信。
要点如下:
1.对夏令营主题的理解;2.根据招聘要求自我介绍;3.参加夏令营的目的。
注意:1.信的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数;2.词数120左右。
Dear Sir,
I’m Li Hua from Fujian.
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
“90后”的缺点 | “90后”的优点 | 你自己的感受 |
1.依赖性强; 2.自私; 3.贪图过舒适的生活等。 | 1.渴望了解周围的世界; 2.思想独立; 3.有很多新观念等。 | …… |
1.必须包括表格中的所有内容;
2.为了使文章通顺完整,可以适当增加内容;
3.词数:100-120左右。
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现状: 全球气候变暖,极端气候频发;空气、水污染严重,垃圾随处可见。
治理措施:1)提高人们的环保意识(awareness)。
2)制定环保法律,违者严惩。
3)你的建议:(至少两条)
要求:1. 短文须包括所有提示内容,再进行适当发挥。
2. 书写规范,卷面整洁(卷面分1--3分)。
How to Protect the Environment
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