题目

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请根据以下提示，结合你生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文。
Volunteers believe that the happiest people in the world are those who help to bring happiness to others.
注意：①无须写标题；
②除诗歌外，文体不限；
③内容必须结合你生活中的一个事例；
④文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
⑤词数不少于120，如引用提示语则不计入总词数。

答案

In recent years, the volunteering spirit has spread among the Chinese people, especially among youngsters.
Five years ago, several of my classmates and I once served as volunteers for the Beijing Olympic Games. In that period of time, I helped arrange for the sports courts, translate for foreign athletes and visitors, and sometimes guide them to right places. It delighted me a lot that I had made a contribution to the success of the Games and brought happiness to others.
As high school students, we should get actively involved in voluntary activities. In this way, we can learn how to work well in a team, how to improve our interpersonal skills and organizational ability. Above all, we can benefit others and gain happiness ourselves. So we should take this chance to learn and to grow.

解析

试题分析：考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。
【亮点说明】文章使用了很好的短语和句子： served as担当， arrange for安排，get actively involved in积极的参与，Above all更重要的是, It delighted me a lot that I had made a contribution to the success of the Games and brought happiness to others.这句话用了形式主语， In this way, we can learn how to work well in a team, how to improve our interpersonal skills and organizational ability. 这句话用了疑问词+不定式的用法。