题目

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请结合材料，按要求用英文写作，词数不少于60。
It is reported that a famous young Chinese singing star, Li Daimo, well- liked by many youngsters, took drugs and was taken away by the police.
要求：
（1）就此材料发表你的感想;
（2）应紧扣材料，有明确的观点;
(3) 请在答题卡上作答。
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答案

One possible version：
The news that li Daimo ,a famous young Chinese singing star liked by many youngsters , took drugs and was taken away by the police shocked the public .I think though people are under great pressure in modern society , they shouldn’t turn to drugs for comfort and relaxiation, especially celebrities. The reason is that the youth often model themselves after these celebrities who should be aware of  the social influence of celebrities . Thus, they should be strict with themselves in all aspects in order to be a good example for others.

解析

试题分析：本文属于材料作文，此类文章首先要简要概述材料内容，然后就此发表议论和看法。写这种作文时考生发挥的余地较大，要根据要求明确提出观点，然后充分展开想象与联想，围绕材料展开行文。为了提高分数，写作时要注意句式的多样化和高级词汇的使用，还要使用适当的时态，此外注意字数不能少于60字。可参考词汇：I think , in my opinion , as far as I am concerned , in my view , the social influence of celebrities。
【亮点说明】作者在本篇范文中首先用一个长句The news that  Li Daimo,a famous young Chinese singer loved by many youngsters ,took drugs and was taken away by the police shocked the public 介绍材料内容，然后对此发表看法，不仅在结构安排上符合材料作文的写作要求，而且也完成了本文的写作要求。实际上本文的最大亮点就是涵盖信息量大的长句的使用，作者一共用了四个长句，其中包括同位语从句，状语从句和并列句等，这充分显示了作者深厚的写作功底，此外，在本文中作者还使用了高级词汇social influence of celebrities, be aware of ，这是文章的另一个亮点所在。