题目
题型:不详难度:来源:
Diligence is the means by which one makes up for one’s dullness. If you are not good at something, you may as well practise it many times until you make it.
注意:
①无须写标题;
②除诗歌外,文体不限;
③内容必须结合你生活中的一个事例;
④文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;
⑤词数不少于120;如引用提示语则不计入总词数。
答案
One possible version:
As is universally acknowledged, practice makes perfect. Needless to say, practice is of great significance for us to challenge drawbacks and achieve success.
It remains fresh in my memory that there was a time when I suffered great frustration in learning English. Failing to master the new words, I gave way to despair, as a consequence of which my academic performance got from bad to worse. Fortunately, a scene that happened to a little boy changed me. At that time I accidentally found him practicing riding bicycle in the playground. Though constantly falling off the bicycle and in pain, he never abandoned it. Instead, he encouraged himself to practice over and over again. At length, he could ride skillfully. Inspired by him, I set about paying more attention and energy to practicing English words and sentences and eventually the progress achieved was considerable.
As is shown in the case above, only by practicing a lot can the flower of success blossom.
解析
试题分析:根据提示判断本文属于话题作文。命题者在提示语中明确提出了话题diligence“勤奋”。由最后一句提示语 practise it many times until you make it 很容易联想到practice makes perfect“熟能生巧”这句话。这个话题很贴近学生的生活,所以在第二段联系实际事例时会相对轻松。当然在列举事例时要主要不要透露个人信息。描写完事例后可用几句话证明文章观点,以丰富文章主体部分。因为事例贴近生活,注意不要使用过于简单的词汇或短语或过多的口语,适当使用一些高级词汇和短语,会使文章提升档次。最后一段用两到三句话总结事例,点名主题。
【亮点说明】
本篇范文灵活使用各种句式如非限制性定语从句As is universally acknowledged,As is shown in the case above,定语从句a scene that happened to a little boy changed me,it作形式主语that引导真正的主语从句It remains fresh in my memory that there was a time when I suffered great frustration in learning English,倒装句 only by practicing a lot can the flower of success blossom等,使文章结构紧凑,同时也显示了作者对英语法语的熟练掌握。在文章第一段和最后一段句首使用as引导的非限制性定语从句,在结构上使得文章有序不凌乱。其次,在第一段引入谚语practice makes perfect是文章的亮点之一。再者,文章第二段现在分词作伴随状语的用法也很巧妙。如Failing to master the new words,Though constantly falling off the bicycle and in pain和Inspired by him。最后,文中高级词汇的使用如significance,At length,considerable也为文章整体层次的提示有很大贡献。
核心考点
试题【请根据以下提示,并结合事例,用英语写一篇短文。Diligence is the means by which one makes up for one’s du】;主要考察你对写作等知识点的理解。[详细]
举一反三
请你根据以上提示,用英语准备一份发言稿,向同学们讲述一下阳光体育活动的有关情况,并就高中学生是否需要每天花一小时锻炼,谈谈你的看法及理由。
注意:1.发言稿应包括以上所有信息,要有适当发挥。
2.词数:120左右。
3.参考词汇:阳光体育活动a national student sports program;教育部the Ministry of Education
Good afternoon, everyone,
Florence Chadwick was born in California in 1918. She grew up on the beach and began competing as a swimmer at the age of six, when her uncle entered her in a race. For the next 19 years, she continued as a competitive swimmer.
On July 4, 1952, at the age of 34, Chadwick attempted to become the first woman to swim 21 miles across the Catalina Channel, from a port on the California coast. That day the ocean was ice cold, the fog was so thick that she could hardly see the support boats that followed her, and sharks swam around her. Several times, her support crew used guns to drive away the sharks. While Americans watched on televisions, her mother and her trainer, who were in one of the support boats, encouraged her to keep going. However, after 15 hours and 55 minutes, with only a half mile to go, she felt that she couldn’t go on, and begged to be taken out of the water.
Later, Chadwick told a reporter, “Look, I’m not excusing myself, but if I had seen land I know, I could have made it.” The fog had made her unable to see her swimming goal, and it made her feel she was getting nowhere. Two months later, she tried again. Although the fog was still heavy, yet this time she made it with the goal rooted in her mind. She knew behind the fog was the land she pursued.
【写作内容】
1.以约30个词概括短文大意;
2.以约120个词就“Goal and Success”的主题谈谈你的看法,内容包括:
1)分析Chadwick第一次失败和第二次成功的原因;
2)Chadwick的故事对你有什么启发;
3)结合实际谈谈如何实现自己的目标。
【写作要求】
1.可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子;
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
1.描述现象;
2.分析原因(至少两条);
3.说明影响;
4.提出建议。
Dear Mr. Helper,
I"m a student from Xinhua Senior High School. I have some difficulty in my English reading comprehension.
Though I practice reading a lot every day, I make no progress. I feel very depressed. I would be grateful if you could give me some advice.
Yours sincerely,
Li Lei
内容要点:
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.信的开头和结尾已为你写好。
要点:
参加中文学习班;看中文书刊电视;学唱中文歌曲;交中国朋友。
注意:
文章开头已给出,不计入总词数;可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
词数:120左右。
Dear Steven,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.
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Best wishes.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
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