题目

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阅读下面一则网络帖子，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文，作为跟帖。
Hello there,
I’m writing to ask you for help. It’s really urgent because I’m considering running away from home. I feel like there"s no way to fix the problem with my mother.
Yesterday evening, we had a heated argument at home after I got home a bit late again.
I had been at my friend’s birthday party. I explained it to her but she just didn’t believe me.
I do know my mother loves me very much and she wants me around every day, or even every minute.
But the fact is that I am 17 years and have my own life style. I am my parents’ only child and my mother says she wants me to have the best possible chance of happiness in the future. She is always telling me to behave well when I leave home or go out. What’s worse, whenever there is a cold war between my mother and me, my father often keeps silent. I am not only confused but also hurt. I don"t know what to say or what to do to make things right. I think they are out of fashion and too old to know my inner part.
To tell the truth, I have packed up my backpack but am still at a loss.
Kate
[写作内容]
1. 以约30个词概括短文的要点;
2. 然后以约120个词就Kate遇到的困惑发表看法，并包括如下要点:
(1) 你认为Kate是否应该离家出走，为什么？
(2) 给Kate提出至少2－3点建议。
[写作要求]
可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
[评分标准]
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。

答案

One possible version:
I’m sorry to hear that you are not getting on well with your mother and that you are considering running away from home after you quarreled with her. But you haven’t made up your mind to leave.
Most teenagers do not like to be restricted and treated like children. But there are many dangers involved in running away. Alone in a strange city or on the street, a teen is an easy target for thieves and other criminals.
In my eyes, trust and communication are of great importance. Why don’t you try to break the ice by talking to your mother about your emotions?
Secondly, know how to calm yourself down after you"re upset. Maybe you need to run around outside, listen to music, or draw. Do whatever safe things you need to do to feel better.
You can also get some help from trusted adults -- someone like your teacher, or neighbor. Know who you can depend on to support and help you.

解析

1. 分概括及写作两部分评分，然后相加再给出该题总分。
2. 概括部分的要点: a. 与母亲争吵;   b. 想离家出走。缺少任何一个要点酌情扣1-2分。
3. 写作部分按0分、1-3分、4-6分、7-10分、11-13分、14-17分和18-20七档给分，根据语法和内容要点情况酌情给分。
●内容要点： a. 是否该离家出走，并给出原因；b. 2－3点建议。