题目

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书面表达。（15分）           
在过去的几年里，你的家乡一定发生了很大的变化。请你比较过去和现在，根据汉语提示，从家乡人们的衣食住行等方面，写一些家乡的可喜变化。文章的开头已经给出，词数80左右。
过去：人们生活贫苦，房屋破旧；人们不爱护环境，随处扔垃圾；交通不便。
现在：住房宽敞明亮，许多人都有了自己的车；大家都保护环境，山变绿了，水变清了，天变蓝;交通方便了
为家乡变化感到自豪,要为家乡……
The changes to my hometown
My hometown is a beautiful city near the Yellow Sea.
                                                                                
                                                                                 
                                                                       

答案

The changes to my hometown
My hometown is a beautiful city near the Yellow Sea.
In the past, my hometown was very small. The house in it were very old. There were no factories or schools here, and the traffic was very poor. The villagers lived a hard life.
Now there have been great changes in our hometown. At present, people live in big houses and many people even have their own cars. Everyone takes action to protect the environment. The water in the river is clean and the sky is blue. The new roads are wide and there are a lot of traffic on them. Our lives are becoming better and be tter.
As a student, we can work hard now. And in the future, we can make our hometown more and more beautiful.

解析

这是一篇给材料作文，根据中文提示词描述一下家乡过去，到现在发生的一系列变化。由于材料已经给出，故写作时主要就是把材料内容用正确的英语表达出来。写作中应注意准确应用时态。比如在介绍家乡的过去时就应用过去时态，介绍现在时就可能用到完成时态与一般现在时态。同时应注意上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，适当应用连接词。尤其注意最后要适当写一点自己的看法，观点不一定要新颖，但要积极向上，尽量捡自己有把握的写。