题目

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假如你叫Jim, 你听到你的好朋友Jack因为玩太多电脑游戏，现在头痛，眼睛不舒服( sore eyes), 腰背酸痛, 晚上还睡不好觉。请你写一封e-mail给他提些建议，劝告他照顾好自己的身体。
提示：
1. 远离电脑休息；
2. 每天做眼保健操 （do eye exercises）；
3. 多锻炼身体，不要一个姿势坐得太久而没有去运动；
要求：
1. 语句通顺、语意连贯；
2. 用上所有提示内容，可以适当发挥；
3. 邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
4. 70词左右。
Dear Jack,
I’m sorry to hear that you are not feeling well these days. You say that you have a headache.
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I hope you will be better soon.                                                        Yours,       
Jim

答案

One possible version：
Dear Jack,
I’m sorry to hear that you are not feeling well these days. You say that you have a headache. You have sore eyes. You have a sore back. And you don’t sleep well at night. I hear that you played computer games too much. That’s probably why you are not feeling well. I think you should take breaks away from the computer. You shouldn’t use the computer for a long time. You should do eyes exercises to relax your eyes every day. And you should get lots of exercises. You shouldn’t sit in the same way for too long without playing sports.
I hope you will be better soon.
Yours,
Jim

解析

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，吉姆写信给他的好朋友杰克，给他一些照顾好自己的身体的建议。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，二人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：you don’t…….；I think……. You should…….及You shouldn’t……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意文后要祝愿他的身体很快恢复。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头说了杰克现在的身体问题，接下来给他一些建议，最后希望他的身体尽快恢复。此处用了have a headache，too much， do eyes exercises，in the same way等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。