题目

八上期末英语求评点打分
Now,the air is very dirty and gives people many problems .For example :the air is harmful for our health So l think we should do that:
No.1 Try to walk to school or take the bus to school Don't use the car to go to schol all the time
No.2 Don't smoking for a long time
No.3 when you leave the house ,Please turn off the lights and TV
lf everyone can do that ,the air will become clean!满分20,检查语法错,并打分（跪求专业滴）
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提问时间：2021-04-05

答案

gives 应改为has given 2. that 应改为 these3.go to school by bus.  go to school by car 4.smoking 改为smoke5.leave house6.clean 改为 cleaner有一些语法错误,主旨比较清楚,要注意细节,自己多检...